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on Anouk by daniella 11 Jul 2003, 8:40 PM
Children are such inspirations for writing. This reminds me of Rita Dove's poem about nursing her daughter. What a gift for your child when she's (?) old enough to appreciate it.
on some deleted poem 22 Jul 2003, 7:02 PM
One of the better sex poems I've read on this site.
on Middleman by INTRANSIT 22 Jul 2003, 6:59 PM
Reminds me of Phish at Limestone, Maine. I like the ending.
on the preacher and the poet by http://findingwater 22 Jul 2003, 6:53 PM
Nice. Don't forget the politician and the actor.
on Truckin' by INTRANSIT 22 Jul 2003, 6:57 PM
What's a bullrack?
on First Confirmation by babyBOOMER 12 Jul 2003, 7:11 AM
Combat fatigue. Nice that you have a place/method to release some of those painful memories, and that you seem to be able to see what happened clearly.
on To Lesley by Bahookie 12 Jul 2003, 7:12 AM
painful
on How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8 12 Jul 2003, 7:16 AM
Thanks for reminding me to wear flip flops in ALL showers from now on.
I like how human this feels. What do these poems in the "pimple" category have in common? Just wondering.
on Volcanized by <{Baba^Yaga}> 11 Jul 2003, 8:20 PM
Nice Haiku.
on The Wonderful Creators by abecedarian 11 Jul 2003, 8:30 PM
It's raining in Baltimore, so I'll dance in the rain if you'll watch the sun rise. Watch out for pupil scarring. This would make a good song.
I thought it was spelled dammit. You learn something new every day. Nice refrain there in the middle.
on The Truth at Face Value by http://findingwater 11 Jul 2003, 8:33 PM
Sounds like an affair poem to me. For once, just (don't) break wind.
on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike 22 Jul 2003, 6:06 PM
Well, I'd wondered what "Pimple" poems had in common.