replying on (untitled) by http://bandgeek
6 Sep 2003, 5:09 PM
Is it not sloppily obvious?
on (untitled) by http://bandgeek
6 Sep 2003, 5:07 PM
title ideas anyone, or other constructive feedback?
on A very special thank you to a very special someone by Livvie
6 Sep 2003, 5:03 PM
Hmm. Ancestor or infant or someone else? I think the idea of Whitney Houston's "I will always love you" takes away from the piece.
on missing time (revised) by Bill Z Bub
6 Sep 2003, 4:59 PM
Very nice, but changing from "she/her" to "you" was a little confusing. 9
replying on To My Future Wife by http://bandgeek
2 Aug 2003, 9:43 AM
Thanks, I think you might be the only one that read past the cheesy title.
replying on Dildo (formerly titled "It") by http://bandgeek
27 Jul 2003, 1:21 PM
Yeah, I know, but the metaphor is marriage. The non-metaphorical "it" could be about any possession we carry around, like stupid VHS movies from the 80's or Nalgene water bottles.
replying on Part II:Rhetoric by http://bandgeek
27 Jul 2003, 1:15 PM
You came back for more even though you hated part 1. Must be an addict.
replying on Dildo (formerly titled "It") by http://bandgeek
27 Jul 2003, 1:06 PM
Read the above comment, it is about marriage. Why haul it around and maintain it instead of rent sex like everyone else. Get it? And I am sure you mean "guy" in the genderless way, like "you guys".
replying on Dildo (formerly titled "It") by http://bandgeek
27 Jul 2003, 12:01 PM
Its about marriage, so yeah, Dildo would be a good title.