poemranker ::20 most recent comments by VorioBuche and replies

Comments byVorioBuche, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

on SHADOWS OF DARKNESS by TanHand 27 Aug 2003, 9:23 PM
You're as goth as a blood red rose reclining on a cut of black velvet. Oh, and there's a drop of blood on the stem. And it's black.
on Karma by blankel 27 Aug 2003, 9:07 PM
I knew this guy in high school. Nice guy. One of the nicest, a good hippie in the suburbs. The guy wouldn't hurt a fly if it was spitting acid on his nuts. He bought a VW bus painted in splotches of every color, thrown on. Beautiful bus. The first day he had it burned to the ground in the school parking lot, taking with it everything he needed to graduate. That's Karma.
on A gift by Birdman42s 26 Aug 2003, 3:40 PM
who invited the 16 year old suburban kids?
replying on Border Crashing by JoyLuck 26 Aug 2003, 3:38 PM
No, she's coming back from Mexico. read the last line, fool.
Then drive to Mexico; the same thing'll happen to you. Promise.