on some deleted poem
16 Jul 2004, 4:03 PM
So do you believe in God or not?
on Southern Mississippii Standstill by wilco
16 Jul 2004, 5:00 PM
When I think of southern USA, I imagine swamps and those boats that look a bit like hovercrafts, and men with dungarees and pitchforks and pigs under their arms. And also of Lynyrd Skynyrd. Maybe you should work these things into your poem.
on I Love You by QuirkyWonder
16 Jul 2004, 5:01 PM
Genius.
on Priority by MacFrantic
16 Jul 2004, 5:04 PM
With a £1000 tart.
on swallow it by anonandonandon
14 Jul 2004, 4:26 PM
I find this crude and offensive.
on some deleted poem
14 Jul 2004, 4:04 PM
Stop trying to pretend you know anything about James Joyce.
on some deleted poem
14 Jul 2004, 4:25 PM
Is this about tossing off? The last four lines especially make me think so.
on some deleted poem
13 Jul 2004, 3:30 PM
Charles Olson also wrote this revolutionary discourse on projective data entry:
http://www.hal-pc.org/journal/feb02/Colu
It is much more creative than the stagnant conventional methods of data entry, I'm sure you'll agree.
http://www.hal-pc.org/journal/feb02/Colu
It is much more creative than the stagnant conventional methods of data entry, I'm sure you'll agree.
on some deleted poem
13 Jul 2004, 3:01 PM
"Supercalifrag-
"ilisticexpiali-
"docious," said Mary.
"ilisticexpiali-
"docious," said Mary.
on some deleted poem
13 Jul 2004, 3:06 PM
I tried reading this poem aloud, by first pausing for exactly 1 minute, 27 seconds, then suddenly standing up and shouting "quim," and then sitting down again for another four minutes before ending the sentence. Was this right?
Anyway, a beautiful piece. I think the structure lends a peculiar, yet not unpleasing, ambiance.
Anyway, a beautiful piece. I think the structure lends a peculiar, yet not unpleasing, ambiance.
on Desperation by gavinduff
12 Jul 2004, 9:23 AM
hi. i realy like your poem!!!1
on All Alone by pinay_miss_azn
12 Jul 2004, 4:00 PM
Hey, this is really great!!1 It reminds me of my new poem. Can I make a suggestion? I reckon "perchance" would be better as "peradventure."
on Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222
12 Jul 2004, 4:05 PM
My favorite bit is :
A shoe-string, dear? Bright red. Short
It cannot be for an adultâs shoe.
Genius
A shoe-string, dear? Bright red. Short
It cannot be for an adultâs shoe.
Genius
on some deleted poem
11 Jul 2004, 1:48 PM
What's the point of all the indentation? If you read this poem out, how would it sound different from a poem that was left aligned, but otherwise identical? Also, what do the full stops at the top and ottom add?
on some deleted poem
11 Jul 2004, 6:42 AM
Yout can't forgive yourself. Jesu wouldn't like that at all.
on The circle of life by sanity
10 Jul 2004, 5:58 AM
What about when the sun explodes?
on The Ladies and the Bum by Dovina
10 Jul 2004, 6:18 AM
You deleted all my comments. Unprofessional.
on Ze invsible limerick by DR Limerick
10 Jul 2004, 5:39 AM
An excellent example of the zero syllable limerick.
on Friends Forever? by nicole081083
10 Jul 2004, 5:53 AM
I think this would work better if you reworked it into a limerick.
on Somber Like My Pain by TwilightDawned
9 Jul 2004, 4:11 PM
I can only assume, given that you have spelled Splinter with a capital S, that you are referring to Splinter off of the Turtles. But what sight could be so horrible that it would make your head literally turn into Splinter off of the Turtles? This poem really doesn't stand up to scrutiny.