on some deleted poem
12 Sep 2003, 1:21 PM
points for venomous bile, but why does something that you can easily avoid conjure up all sorts of cruel & voilent images?
on some deleted poem
12 Sep 2003, 11:51 AM
very painful content - I hope this isn't your reality
on some deleted poem
12 Sep 2003, 12:09 PM
strong mix of emotions - desire and passivism - well done
on A Fistful of Haiku in Yellow by HaikuMofo
12 Sep 2003, 12:30 PM
The title is great - Clint should be reading these
on some deleted poem
12 Sep 2003, 12:33 PM
sorry, I didn't get it and the imagery is a little obscure for me
on let's pretend that we can write! by val
12 Sep 2003, 12:28 PM
valid points, some witty parts - seems a bit bulletproof, though. "My poetic commentary on bad poetry was intentionally not that great"
on Secret Dream-Thoughts of a Married Man by Bethy
4 Aug 2005, 1:53 PM
I like it - the subject matter hits home. Honest and sad without being weepy. I stumbled over one line: "If you only knew what my eyes think"... The rest was concrete, but that was kind of abstract. Thanks for sharing