on The Poison by TheTiredTyrant
29 Jul 2002, 5:35 AM
This poem perfetly summarises what is wrong with the people of my city. Sheffield. Amazing. I feel like the mice.
on Jim Shady. by The troubled sinner
30 Jul 2002, 5:29 AM
I don't have enough time to tell you my sins from the last day - never mind any longer. I am truly a sinner.
on Arts stare by Art Glocken
29 Jul 2002, 5:40 AM
The work of My Glocken never fails to disappoint me. Such a talent - wasted. Reminisent of gazza.
on Painting by Art Glocken
29 Jul 2002, 5:40 AM
The work of My Glocken never fails to disappoint me. Such a talent - wasted. Reminisent of gazza
on Dirty Pops by Tarquin De La Bog
17 Aug 2002, 1:24 PM
Tarquin, I must say, your work reminds me of the late 60's poet Mr J Reeve - both VERY classy.
on The War by Tarquin De La Bog
17 Aug 2002, 1:27 PM
Takes me back to a walk down a Paris canal in 1943. So it must be good. If this doesn't make the top ten nothing will. Keep it up. The Sinner.
on The Sea by Tarquin De La Bog
17 Aug 2002, 1:30 PM
You lot all need to wank more instead of taking out your frustration on a poetry website. Sheesh. Take it for what it is - simple fun. Nice one Tarquin.
on grope by Mister Cakes
6 Aug 2002, 5:22 AM
So true, so DAMM true. Fucking taunting us - 24-7. Capturing us in their icy glares.
on some deleted poem
30 Jul 2002, 5:22 AM
Brave of you to braoch this delicate area, it could have fallen flat on its feet but Johnny, you somehow carry it off. Bravo.
on some deleted poem
30 Jul 2002, 5:27 AM
I didn't think ANYTHING could capture what John meant to Great Britain - but you have. A round of applause all round please! (CLAP)
on The train by Art Glocken
29 Jul 2002, 5:41 AM
The work of My Glocken never fails to disappoint me. Such a talent - wasted. Reminisent of gazza
on Seasonal Memories by ErgoErgun
29 Jul 2002, 5:45 AM
Not sure about your structure? it could do with some editing but otherwise a decent effort. Keep trying.