on My Office by Tascobar
4 Sep 2002, 11:45 AM
Everyone scratches themselves at work. If we didn't we'd have to do something like type. She won't think you've got crabs. Hopefully. I lilke the triotic curve you give it with the last two lines. Wonderful work.
on The Sea by Tarquin De La Bog
17 Aug 2002, 1:30 PM
You lot all need to wank more instead of taking out your frustration on a poetry website. Sheesh. Take it for what it is - simple fun. Nice one Tarquin.
on The War by Tarquin De La Bog
17 Aug 2002, 1:27 PM
Takes me back to a walk down a Paris canal in 1943. So it must be good. If this doesn't make the top ten nothing will. Keep it up. The Sinner.
on Dirty Pops by Tarquin De La Bog
17 Aug 2002, 1:24 PM
Tarquin, I must say, your work reminds me of the late 60's poet Mr J Reeve - both VERY classy.
on grope by Mister Cakes
6 Aug 2002, 5:22 AM
So true, so DAMM true. Fucking taunting us - 24-7. Capturing us in their icy glares.
on Jim Shady. by The troubled sinner
30 Jul 2002, 5:29 AM
I don't have enough time to tell you my sins from the last day - never mind any longer. I am truly a sinner.
on Seasonal Memories by ErgoErgun
29 Jul 2002, 5:45 AM
Not sure about your structure? it could do with some editing but otherwise a decent effort. Keep trying.
on The train by Art Glocken
29 Jul 2002, 5:41 AM
The work of My Glocken never fails to disappoint me. Such a talent - wasted. Reminisent of gazza
on Painting by Art Glocken
29 Jul 2002, 5:40 AM
The work of My Glocken never fails to disappoint me. Such a talent - wasted. Reminisent of gazza
on Arts stare by Art Glocken
29 Jul 2002, 5:40 AM
The work of My Glocken never fails to disappoint me. Such a talent - wasted. Reminisent of gazza.
on The Poison by TheTiredTyrant
29 Jul 2002, 5:35 AM
This poem perfetly summarises what is wrong with the people of my city. Sheffield. Amazing. I feel like the mice.