poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Bachus (421-440)

Comments byBachus, 421–440 back. Include replies

on some deleted poem 12 Jun 2003, 9:15 AM
That was just damn clean fun 10!
on The boy by geewhiz1962 4 Jun 2003, 5:12 PM
About time, where do I sign?
on Mommy Dearest by Babigurly69 8 Jun 2003, 2:20 PM
What a crock.
on One Night Stand by Audaciouslilgrl 12 Jun 2003, 3:54 PM
What would you do to it if I put it in your hand?
on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 5:21 PM
How do I buy these three?

http://www.everybodysmile.biz/eadenlilley/evnts/2028/page1.html

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on some deleted poem 12 Jun 2003, 1:48 PM
I am gay
I am a filet
of 1 lb. sole

If you're gay
Perhaps we can play
inside my hole

You might lay
me backlike a real man
and fuck me something proper
You just might
You just
You
Yo
Y?
not
on The rock star and the ATM by Shardik 12 Jun 2003, 1:16 PM
Go fuck your mom's face with potato peeler James. Submit or shut up outsider.
on The rock star and the ATM by Shardik 12 Jun 2003, 1:40 PM
Yes, James, I agree that must be why my fish tank whistles three times a day for tea and my house is made of scoria. I'm in HELL! Good god and I thought those were just ugly talking birds shitting on my patio umbrella?
on some deleted poem 11 Jun 2003, 1:56 PM
I don't mean to be rude, but why did you write this? To convey to us just how shattered you are? Don't you get bored with teen angst droolery? Be a big girl and squat your head into an oven and suck gas, or better yet float face first in the neighbors pool. that takes style and guts. Why do idiots that can't write denounce poetry somehow equates suicide? All of these stupid fucking teenage autrocious poets cutting themselves. Good god if you spent as much time writing as you do day dreaming about cutting off your clit and shoving it up your dads ass, you'd fucking be a poet and not think about hurting herself or my eyes with this 10 year old cry bag o molestation 101.
on Liar by Babigurly69 8 Jun 2003, 2:23 PM
You are, YOU ARE! not "your". "Your a typical guy" So are you, isn't that keen, also, once again "your" is you're, idiot.
God's wife is to Dickerson, what your mouth is to Dickormouth. By the way I hate William Blake almost as much as I hate you fuck nose.
on sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub 5 Jun 2003, 5:13 PM
It was better left unexplained. Fuck them, make them draw their own conclusions. Make them imagine. I, on the other hand, gathered something very similiar too your explanation the first time in the cage.
That was the worst, really, you should hairdryer your pecker in a toilet (if you can reach the water, that is) immediately.
on some deleted poem 4 Jun 2003, 4:03 PM
Sure.
on Platform by Exiled_humanity 4 Jun 2003, 4:26 PM
"The plug shaped yellow face" lol.
on Platform by Exiled_humanity 4 Jun 2003, 4:27 PM
Dude, this poem should be torn appart and shot at you through a straw.
on Hiding from the Day by loneshadow29 4 Jun 2003, 4:33 PM
Parghhhhhhh

urnmphhhhhh

Mahrgggg

Whoumphhhhh.

Grrrrrrrunmph

plop.
on some deleted poem 12 Jun 2003, 12:42 PM
Journey tripe.
on some deleted poem 12 Jun 2003, 12:44 PM
The title should be

"Bewitched".
on drops of blood in the wind by crwncka1 12 Jun 2003, 1:36 PM
pp