on Advertising says: by Dovina
2 Mar 2005, 3:17 PM
Contrived crap
on Chrystal lane swift want's me, bad. by horus8
10 Feb 2005, 7:26 PM
If I could tolerate beaver, I'd wear yours.
on Into My World by sliver
28 Nov 2004, 7:53 PM
As opposed to into Uranus?
I'm sorry but this is so ransacked with cliche,
and trite nonsense that it's practically a
zit cream commercial.
For instance:
"Rosebuds seem pale in your presence
even when wet with my tears"
Okay, what kind of fuck munch cries on a rose?
Do you normally walk into a garden and find a rose to water with your contrived tears of woe?
Your an ass.
"Emotions swell when you're near
yearning to be unfurled"
I love your language here.
Makes you sound like a black porn star
named Harry Homellete.
I'm sorry but this is so ransacked with cliche,
and trite nonsense that it's practically a
zit cream commercial.
For instance:
"Rosebuds seem pale in your presence
even when wet with my tears"
Okay, what kind of fuck munch cries on a rose?
Do you normally walk into a garden and find a rose to water with your contrived tears of woe?
Your an ass.
"Emotions swell when you're near
yearning to be unfurled"
I love your language here.
Makes you sound like a black porn star
named Harry Homellete.
on A Child Learns (haiku) by poetryman
9 Nov 2004, 5:56 PM
Is there 8 syllabols in line 2?
on A Child Learns (haiku) by poetryman
9 Nov 2004, 5:56 PM
What about a child of rape?
on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina
9 Nov 2004, 1:37 PM
Ah "crusty and clean"
Like brain cancer.
the third stanza
is utter crap, but...
I didn't know weaker defense was dusty?
And I've never seen snow with dust, because
dust is dry, do you mean silt? or dusty snow?
Only you could make an afternoon walk, this
fucking confusing.
Like brain cancer.
the third stanza
is utter crap, but...
I didn't know weaker defense was dusty?
And I've never seen snow with dust, because
dust is dry, do you mean silt? or dusty snow?
Only you could make an afternoon walk, this
fucking confusing.
replying on Mind's Eye by Sean Allen
9 Nov 2004, 1:34 PM
That was pretty funny for a fat chick.
replying on Mind's Eye by Sean Allen
9 Nov 2004, 1:34 PM
Hush.
on Mind's Eye by Sean Allen
9 Nov 2004, 1:33 PM
I was hoping for shit, but found a modicum of shine.
on Silly sickness by fevriere
9 Nov 2004, 1:32 PM
I feel the same way about dung beatles.
replying on "I post here cause I have a lot of readers" by Bachus
9 Nov 2004, 1:13 PM
yo mom
on keep on digging by nentwined
9 Nov 2004, 1:10 PM
Almost.
on Bowie Still Gives Me a Bonner by phauge
9 Nov 2004, 1:09 PM
A B Flat.
on The huntsman's shame by Stephen Robins
8 Nov 2004, 12:44 PM
Clearly a miracle.
on Geometry for Dyslexics by zodiac
7 Nov 2004, 11:35 PM
That was a mouthful of muscle.
on Market Day in Al-Karak, South Jordan by zodiac
21 Oct 2004, 11:13 AM
A Sand Sandwich
on Fingernails by thepinkbunnyofdoom
21 Oct 2004, 11:00 AM
BRUNCH!
on Many Thanks by Dovina
23 Sep 2004, 6:06 PM
Nice a poker face...
on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose
23 Sep 2004, 1:36 PM
The Nuding Hose By The Parson's Nose