on some deleted poem
23 Sep 2004, 1:38 PM
Want a popper big bopper?
on Many Thanks by Dovina
23 Sep 2004, 6:06 PM
Nice a poker face...
on Fingernails by thepinkbunnyofdoom
21 Oct 2004, 11:00 AM
BRUNCH!
on some deleted poem
21 Oct 2004, 11:13 AM
Iffy
on Market Day in Al-Karak, South Jordan by zodiac
21 Oct 2004, 11:13 AM
A Sand Sandwich
on Geometry for Dyslexics by zodiac
7 Nov 2004, 11:35 PM
That was a mouthful of muscle.
on The huntsman's shame by Stephen Robins
8 Nov 2004, 12:44 PM
Clearly a miracle.
on Bowie Still Gives Me a Bonner by phauge
9 Nov 2004, 1:09 PM
A B Flat.
on keep on digging by nentwined
9 Nov 2004, 1:10 PM
Almost.
on Silly sickness by fevriere
9 Nov 2004, 1:32 PM
I feel the same way about dung beatles.
on Mind's Eye by Sean Allen
9 Nov 2004, 1:33 PM
I was hoping for shit, but found a modicum of shine.
on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina
9 Nov 2004, 1:37 PM
Ah "crusty and clean"
Like brain cancer.
the third stanza
is utter crap, but...
I didn't know weaker defense was dusty?
And I've never seen snow with dust, because
dust is dry, do you mean silt? or dusty snow?
Only you could make an afternoon walk, this
fucking confusing.
Like brain cancer.
the third stanza
is utter crap, but...
I didn't know weaker defense was dusty?
And I've never seen snow with dust, because
dust is dry, do you mean silt? or dusty snow?
Only you could make an afternoon walk, this
fucking confusing.
on A Child Learns (haiku) by poetryman
9 Nov 2004, 5:56 PM
What about a child of rape?
on A Child Learns (haiku) by poetryman
9 Nov 2004, 5:56 PM
Is there 8 syllabols in line 2?
on some deleted poem
10 Nov 2004, 11:49 AM
I was banned at AP for threedays for passing gas
in the mouth of another, pray for me.
in the mouth of another, pray for me.
on Into My World by sliver
28 Nov 2004, 7:53 PM
As opposed to into Uranus?
I'm sorry but this is so ransacked with cliche,
and trite nonsense that it's practically a
zit cream commercial.
For instance:
"Rosebuds seem pale in your presence
even when wet with my tears"
Okay, what kind of fuck munch cries on a rose?
Do you normally walk into a garden and find a rose to water with your contrived tears of woe?
Your an ass.
"Emotions swell when you're near
yearning to be unfurled"
I love your language here.
Makes you sound like a black porn star
named Harry Homellete.
I'm sorry but this is so ransacked with cliche,
and trite nonsense that it's practically a
zit cream commercial.
For instance:
"Rosebuds seem pale in your presence
even when wet with my tears"
Okay, what kind of fuck munch cries on a rose?
Do you normally walk into a garden and find a rose to water with your contrived tears of woe?
Your an ass.
"Emotions swell when you're near
yearning to be unfurled"
I love your language here.
Makes you sound like a black porn star
named Harry Homellete.
on Chrystal lane swift want's me, bad. by horus8
10 Feb 2005, 7:26 PM
If I could tolerate beaver, I'd wear yours.
on some deleted poem
2 Mar 2005, 3:15 PM
A Parliment Of Shit.
on Advertising says: by Dovina
2 Mar 2005, 3:17 PM
Contrived crap