on some deleted poem
23 Dec 2002, 6:09 PM
"a small donkey's head. (Maybe)" ha, ha, ha oh shit..jesus. that's gotta be one of da's right..ha ha haaaaa. wohhhhhhhh shit, sorry.you're right. damn fine pasting.a
on The Coming Light by poetandknowit
23 Dec 2002, 4:49 PM
unless of course, he is stan rice. now that would be the ultimate in theatre. ha ha,(p&k = stan rice) than i'd be wrong, but i'm not am i.E
on some deleted poem
23 Dec 2002, 12:23 PM
can i just ask? why the numbers after dreammaker? or is that privilaged information. oh..sorry about the recent death, or just your attempt at depicting once metaphorical day in the life. have a six for honesty.
on Seven Little Pills by kaykat
23 Dec 2002, 12:35 PM
okay here goes. i went to see your homepage, and i'm a bit confused did you get the pills from, mom, britt, or just some weird doctor. lol. also are you a real distressed human young lady, or a drunk old lonely man with a crippled and psychotic imagination? regardless of all of that said..this poem is to punkrock what moist towelletes are to steak eaters at a casino somewhere in winnemucca nevada.
on some deleted poem
23 Dec 2002, 5:30 PM
why, lordie why no vaseline with my electrodes. simple. gerbal ran generator..
on some deleted poem
23 Dec 2002, 12:14 PM
fuck yeah. like when you went back to candels, ash, grey and that 'stuff' i was like fuck boring becasuse i've read all your work, and it was a starting to get all a bit too repetitive for 'me' then pow! this took off like a missile a king missile. 9.
on strange beds (1983) by Bill Z Bub
22 Dec 2002, 8:43 PM
i almost don't wanna see that last sentence. i thought is was perfect up until that ummm. think on that then i'll come back and vote later, but i'll probably will give it a ten, just for the last stanza alone(not including last sentence) read that bad boy ten times out loud by itself. lol. strong strudel filler batman. how well do you know razorgrin.?
on some deleted poem
22 Dec 2002, 5:33 PM
"DARK ANGEL?? YOU THINK PEOPLE FIND THAT CRAP FUNNY?
YOUR HUMOUR IS LIKE DAVID GEST'S FACE" ha ha lol. move everything you said about yourself to horus's stanza leaving in the drugs to maintain the truth and respect that this poem deserves. the rest of the stanzas are a waste, but i will give you a BACHIAN SWAGGER AWARD for consistantly 'hoofing' it up! i left my crack pipe and my favourite gold plaTED midget in your garage, could you mail them back to me..first class? thanks..by the way, i met the heir of the frito olay fortune last night in laguna. she's looking for a new amanuensif. i recommended you.
YOUR HUMOUR IS LIKE DAVID GEST'S FACE" ha ha lol. move everything you said about yourself to horus's stanza leaving in the drugs to maintain the truth and respect that this poem deserves. the rest of the stanzas are a waste, but i will give you a BACHIAN SWAGGER AWARD for consistantly 'hoofing' it up! i left my crack pipe and my favourite gold plaTED midget in your garage, could you mail them back to me..first class? thanks..by the way, i met the heir of the frito olay fortune last night in laguna. she's looking for a new amanuensif. i recommended you.
on some deleted poem
20 Dec 2002, 4:38 PM
long should be ping, because should be ring worm, while should be ajax (w/bleach) and and should be but.....most of all genius should be changed to Dessert.m
on some deleted poem
20 Dec 2002, 4:44 PM
"convection zones" that's prudent. ash should be cash on tuesdays and hash every other fucking day, but sundays, see cause that would be wrong.d
you had my attention until you went "wassup", then i started picking my belly button and reading the globe again. what? no nitros? tsk. it's also a mind crunch to read and really bloated, you could of said it all with one sentence. "Stupid fucking rave full of complaisant retards, and then some." shame really. hope you're okay?
on downtown bus by Bill Z Bub
20 Dec 2002, 5:34 PM
when the infant is cradled it stops it's baby wailing perhaphs un-rocked? last stanza's gold.
on Comfort Food by jessicazee
20 Dec 2002, 7:14 PM
"snug lumpia" are better than pierogis any day. this was a great poem and still will be later, after 'was'.
on some deleted poem
20 Dec 2002, 7:24 PM
needs more prada plugs, and a mustache ride 5 cents hat with a dime crossed out. and syke is spelled pike. piker. cheeky saint.e
on some deleted poem
20 Dec 2002, 8:16 PM
why lordie! why! do i feel all dirty and mocked..my hoof shows not the beauty of my superman hair, nor my winning smile..only a...wait a minute? it's ...it's a bingo ball..i..i can almost see a number what? what..i cant se...GOT IT! B4! BINGO! BINGO! FUCK!? what do you mean she got it before me?..she was smelling her armpit and saying OH- RINGO!m
on some deleted poem
20 Dec 2002, 10:31 AM
the use of "thier" and "spock" in the same tale is pure cutting edge "salone poetry genius". i suppose you want a zero for christmas. your wish? my command.
on A christmas thought by keatsImnot
19 Dec 2002, 7:03 PM
"Of Jesue Christ will little think" this is my feel good sentence of the week lol, and for that you my friend get the kale GUN on full automatic!calcium rich greeness, all for you, and later if your lucky i'll let you scrub my hoof. change air to dirt, christmas to labor day, and bethlem to bangcock to really get the gelt of it.
on some deleted poem
23 Dec 2002, 5:26 PM
are you calling me the amanuensis?
never.
never.