on Involunarily yours, by jacqui
28 Sep 2003, 10:02 PM
how can you honestly give it one at least give me feedback
on Break Me by Freethinker1602
28 Sep 2003, 10:01 PM
definitely a good idea. it could be better but then again couldn't everything
on Nightmares by openwounds
28 Sep 2003, 9:53 PM
i totally get the feeling you are conveying. there are some cliches like sheep, etc. but the poem is well composed
on Something I can't explain by milkymilk
28 Sep 2003, 9:51 PM
The flow of the poem is very good. i really enjoyed reading it