on Tijuana jail song by horus8
31 Jul 2002, 1:37 PM
crazy-stupid vivid!.. Da1 w/ the speech impediment
on The Snowglobe by josh_5o
31 Jul 2002, 2:08 PM
Newness.
on Invisible too by horus8
31 Jul 2002, 2:03 PM
This one's beuatiful. But is it you the timid admirer or her(a ghost against the headstone) who is invisible. Judging from your poetry its probably both... Da1, holla back
on Invisible too by horus8
31 Jul 2002, 2:04 PM
oh and i especially like the use of "left/right"... Very saucy.
on The Wrong Choice by TheVampireLeStan
31 Jul 2002, 9:58 AM
inspirational and a profound illustration of the true consequence a foolish action... Da1 (my sister tried to commit suicide)
on Fragrant Blossom by Jody Conn
31 Jul 2002, 10:08 AM
this should be printed on condom packages to increase sales, cuz DAMN! It's just lovely enough...Da1 w/ no lubrication --smile--
on You Were There by danevie
31 Jul 2002, 10:10 AM
Next.
on scarred by TheVampireLeStan
31 Jul 2002, 10:13 AM
Gothic confessions, no? you must wear long sleeves
on mass transit by silentcat
31 Jul 2002, 10:14 AM
I feel you in the worst way... well put, Da1
on Black Rose by TheVampireLeStan
31 Jul 2002, 10:23 AM
Just to let you know,I love you... Da1 says let her free and arm yourself with the weapon of indifference.
on Lonely Night by faded
31 Jul 2002, 9:13 AM
A lifetime on the flipside... I definitely like, Da1
on some deleted poem
31 Jul 2002, 9:17 AM
I think it just may be. "Things that make you say hmmm..." Da1, holla
on red snow by sainthypro
31 Jul 2002, 9:21 AM
oooohh, deep indeed. Could probably do without the second "dreaming, scheming" in stanza2. or not? Da1 said it.
on some deleted poem
31 Jul 2002, 9:24 AM
elementary but there's spirit in your form. Da1
on some deleted poem
31 Jul 2002, 9:33 AM
alrighty then
on What Does it Mean to be Human by Sterling5583
31 Jul 2002, 9:47 AM
opinionated but i guess that's "poetry"...Keep it up and as real as possible, Da1
on Angelic Triumvirate by Sterling5583
31 Jul 2002, 9:40 AM
Very cool
on Invisible too by horus8
31 Jul 2002, 2:19 PM
Horus8 r u talking 2 me?