on If I Had by forsaken
17 Jan 2009, 9:25 PM
sappy, fresh and sticky
on Ever With Me by forsaken
17 Jan 2009, 9:19 PM
good question
on The Wind by Reuben Spiteri
11 Oct 2002, 7:43 PM
Deep.
on Victim No More by PawnedTidal
2 Sep 2002, 1:13 AM
Well displayed and interesting. I like the line, " Last night I woke up crying/ Becuase all my dreams were shattered. Personal aura also.
on no pretty words by silvertongueddevil
28 Aug 2002, 10:43 PM
PIMP!!! In a major way, this saucy as can be... DA1, missing my Ex.
on Freeform (No votes yet) 0 comments by abecedarian
28 Aug 2002, 10:27 PM
i feel your pain
on Why am I here? by harrytuttle
28 Aug 2002, 10:03 PM
How depressing man. But it works to a certain extent.
on Wildcatting The Canard: by horus8
28 Aug 2002, 9:39 PM
Oh shiznit! I love this in ways i shouldnt... Da1 has been subconscously contradicted to my satisfying surprise. Keep it raw and nasty-saucy! One
on overwhelmed by nentwined
28 Aug 2002, 9:22 PM
RACY ANDinsightful, I especially like the imagery and upherismic development. Good as usual, Da1 with defecation on my lips
on would i be considered crazy by silvertongueddevil
28 Aug 2002, 9:15 PM
The true affliction of whole-hearted desire conveyed nicely... Da1, on an full stomach
on desire is the constant by silvertongueddevil
28 Aug 2002, 9:03 PM
DAMN! keep it deep and refreshing...
DA1 meant it too!
DA1 meant it too!
on as the hostage by silvertongueddevil
28 Aug 2002, 8:55 PM
Creatively sexy and attention demanding. Da1, with criminal intentions to kidnap.
on Disillusioned & Confused by Sigh'ense...
28 Aug 2002, 8:35 PM
Thankx 4 the critique. and I look forward top more of your analysis...
on savior of humanity: by Sapphire
26 Aug 2002, 12:09 PM
Weird but... I quess.
on School by shwenatjadeflower
26 Aug 2002, 11:54 AM
teen-spirited, and universally relative. Keep saucilating, Da1
on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit
26 Aug 2002, 11:46 AM
As lovely as it is saucy... it's a cool 8 and some change, atleast in my opinion, Da1