on Freeform (No votes yet) 0 comments by abecedarian
28 Aug 2002, 10:27 PM
i feel your pain
on some deleted poem
26 Aug 2002, 12:13 PM
Keep it real, but unending
on Disillusioned & Confused by Sigh'ense...
28 Aug 2002, 8:35 PM
Thankx 4 the critique. and I look forward top more of your analysis...
on The Wind by Reuben Spiteri
11 Oct 2002, 7:43 PM
Deep.
on Victim No More by PawnedTidal
2 Sep 2002, 1:13 AM
Well displayed and interesting. I like the line, " Last night I woke up crying/ Becuase all my dreams were shattered. Personal aura also.
on some deleted poem
28 Aug 2002, 8:48 PM
Very sweet and comfortably read. Lovely in a saucy way(saucy meaning individually expressive and unique,signature comprehension, just as poetry should be). Philosophy by Da1
on desire is the constant by silvertongueddevil
28 Aug 2002, 9:03 PM
DAMN! keep it deep and refreshing...
DA1 meant it too!
DA1 meant it too!
on would i be considered crazy by silvertongueddevil
28 Aug 2002, 9:15 PM
The true affliction of whole-hearted desire conveyed nicely... Da1, on an full stomach
on overwhelmed by nentwined
28 Aug 2002, 9:22 PM
RACY ANDinsightful, I especially like the imagery and upherismic development. Good as usual, Da1 with defecation on my lips
on Wildcatting The Canard: by horus8
28 Aug 2002, 9:39 PM
Oh shiznit! I love this in ways i shouldnt... Da1 has been subconscously contradicted to my satisfying surprise. Keep it raw and nasty-saucy! One
on some deleted poem
28 Aug 2002, 9:42 PM
Very gooey..( It's a good thing, i think).. Da1
on Why am I here? by harrytuttle
28 Aug 2002, 10:03 PM
How depressing man. But it works to a certain extent.
on some deleted poem
28 Aug 2002, 10:06 PM
Through and through... Da1, thoroughly
on no pretty words by silvertongueddevil
28 Aug 2002, 10:43 PM
PIMP!!! In a major way, this saucy as can be... DA1, missing my Ex.
on some deleted poem
26 Aug 2002, 12:20 PM
PIMP!
on savior of humanity: by Sapphire
26 Aug 2002, 12:09 PM
Weird but... I quess.
on as the hostage by silvertongueddevil
28 Aug 2002, 8:55 PM
Creatively sexy and attention demanding. Da1, with criminal intentions to kidnap.
on Ever With Me by forsaken
17 Jan 2009, 9:19 PM
good question