poemranker ::Ever With Me by forsaken

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Ever With Me

Member since 2003 · Posted 4 Jul 2007 · Edited 9 Jul 2007 · 1 comment

They're like vultures in the sky I swear tonight one of us will die Picking at flesh with their beaks Straight off my bones I'm getting weak I can feel them taring me apart It's like they ripped out my heart Their claws left a huge gaping whole Big enough to let loose my soul I sense the reaper begin his creeping His hand reaches out for me my face seeping Out from my eye sockets the blood pours He takes my soul leaving my body on the floor Taking me on a long trip underground With nothing but lingering souls around What have I done to be heading to hell I ask with a grin he says do I really need to tell You all the terrible things you've done Says I've committed every sin under the sun I fall to my knees and beg god for his pity With a thuderous voice he replys in life were you ever with me

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[7] Sigh'ense... 17-Jan-09/9:19 PM Reply
good question