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School

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 Aug 2002 · 18 comments

Today was the first day of school. Tonight I won't play pool. Cause the place i go is 18 and up and you have to go late when the bouncer is fucked up. Heh. My hair is bright red. I wish I were dead. My life is shot to hell. Damn that tardy bell. I missed it, and already I'm egging summer on. I saw my old crush. My lunches are mush. Best friend vanished. Hope I won't get banished for my bright red hair.

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18 comments

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 15-Aug-02/6:43 PM Reply

Though my reputation's tarnished/my wooden dick's still varnished/and I can beat the Cornish/at anything you'd care to name.

[n/a] shwenatjadeflower 15-Aug-02/6:45 PM Reply

yea...well....i'd like to see ya try :P

[8] Venus 15-Aug-02/10:36 PM Reply

Keep it up 8/10

[n/a] deleted user 16-Aug-02/6:47 AM Reply

you sound like one naughty, rebellious high school girl. ever take ballet?

[n/a] shwenatjadeflower 17-Aug-02/5:40 PM Reply

ballet? you gotta be kidding me, never would i wear a pink fucking tutu

[n/a] deleted user 22-Aug-02/9:48 AM Reply

that's too bad.

[8] Sigh'ense... 26-Aug-02/11:54 AM Reply

teen-spirited, and universally relative. Keep saucilating, Da1

[n/a] shwenatjadeflower 26-Aug-02/6:36 PM Reply

you guys are so cool. lol. enjoy the poetry. :) if you can call this rubbish i write poetry.

[10] ==Doylum 26-Aug-02/6:40 PM Reply

your poetry isn't rubbish, its wonderful. I love your poem they make me smile, and sometime they make me sad. Keep writting them. Lots of love Doylum.

[n/a] shwenatjadeflower 26-Aug-02/6:57 PM Reply

You are so sweet to say so Doylum. I am glad you enjoy my "poetry" I wish there wasn't a limit on the amount of poems I could write per week. When I get worked up over something I just wanna log on and write. But i can't as often as I want. but that's what all these poems are. Your comment made my day. Thanks. ~Jade

[n/a] horus8 26-Aug-02/8:57 PM Reply

wow! this is really interesting now, an irish dike in the skin of a mick who doesn't even live across the atlantic on an island cuz he lives on a potatoe in idaho, bonding with a 57 year old nympho maniac who's never even had sex yet cuz she's really a gay man who's afraid of germs...you fucks need therapy and a good tongue pulling....prepare..20 hail marys and a pint of cum to ye each......fucking make me sick your fucking masks are all crooked for crying out loud....here let me fix'em------------die slowaslowsodomizedcudtblastingfeverthickdeathyescavengersofpilferings<capitulateatonce> 10/20/1/9/6/4yeah<novices.>m

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 27-Aug-02/6:23 AM Reply

shwentahtadndjadlower, you should know that Doylum is a) deceitful, b) a perv and c) he's captured Father Christmas, and if you get too close he'll capture you too. Only Jesu knows what horrors would result then...

[8] Christof 27-Aug-02/6:31 AM Reply

When I had hair, it was red, and my oh my how I feel your pain. I especially like the 'Heh'. Every poem should have one. Bonza.

[n/a] razorgrin 27-Aug-02/7:47 AM Reply

Very nice. My hair is red, though not naturally. I like red hair, don't listen to what they say.

[8] Christof 27-Aug-02/7:51 AM Reply

Red heads must stick together. We are an abused minority.

[n/a] poetandknowit 28-Aug-02/2:46 PM Reply

So how do kids get grounded these days?

[10] ==Doylum 28-Aug-02/3:09 PM Reply

I HAVE NOT CAPTURE FARTHER CHRISTMAS. BASTARD. I only borrowed him for a while whilst kenith was away on holiday. Don't utter such falseitites again, or i shall be forced to send you down sulphur mine, with the elves and cherubime, and you know how nasty the cherubime can be at this time of year.

[10] ==Doylum 28-Aug-02/3:27 PM Reply

Jo 90 i belive you must be from cornland yourself. Only a westcountry bumpcin and creater of crap-sircls (please note use of authentic phonetics)could possible make cornish rhyme with varnish