on some deleted poem
8 Jun 2007, 6:59 PM
One for the angst.
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4 Jun 2007, 7:07 AM
Chinese fortune cookie?
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5 Jun 2007, 8:52 AM
5-7-5 But who counts?
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14 Feb 2007, 5:09 PM
Is this the best you can do, or is this the best you want to do? Not just this post, but the other two as well are really rather poorly done.
on some deleted poem
16 Feb 2007, 7:04 AM
thanks. but. no.
on some deleted poem
5 Feb 2007, 5:59 AM
Are you actually trying to write poetry?
I only ask because you are so bad at it, that you must be having some sort of a private joke with your postings. I am a bit curious as to your intentions.
I only ask because you are so bad at it, that you must be having some sort of a private joke with your postings. I am a bit curious as to your intentions.
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3 Feb 2007, 4:32 PM
It is a bit better with a rhyme at the end. I suppose a belt is a comforting way to remember a pet unless the fit is tight. As a whimsy this is okay. I up my zero to a one.
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7 Feb 2007, 7:13 AM
Aside from a least one spelling error, (you might try using spell-check. I use to my great advantage [It almost makes me appear educated.]; some people really get their butts out of whack when a letter is left off or placed in the wrong spot.) , this is really a fine piece. Thanks.
on some deleted poem
10 Feb 2007, 7:10 AM
YOU ARE WELCOME TO STAY THERE!
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8 Feb 2007, 4:12 PM
Does not even make it to the lowest form of greeting card.
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3 Mar 2007, 4:32 AM
nigh unto scent a mint
simple but half way good
simple but half way good
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8 Mar 2007, 6:05 AM
A good capture. So you can write good stuff sometimes. What a surprise!
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17 Apr 2007, 5:16 PM
Don't know what happened. rockmage
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11 May 2007, 7:22 AM
interesting approach, but no go
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10 Jul 2007, 8:07 AM
âClaiming Everestâ does not seem to have anything to do with its title. It is similar, quite similar, to Dovinaâs âMiles Apart, You Sayâ and equally bad. I am very sorry to say.
on some deleted poem
4 Aug 2007, 6:21 AM
You really Think This is a poetry?
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14 Aug 2007, 5:32 PM
snort chuckle 'blows nose' tosses tissue
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21 Sep 2007, 7:29 AM
Unrequited love of self?
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31 Aug 2007, 8:25 AM
sick bugger
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16 Sep 2007, 5:35 PM
toke a few more and you will think you had