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regarding some deleted poem... 3-Feb-07/4:32 PM
It is a bit better with a rhyme at the end. I suppose a belt is a comforting way to remember a pet unless the fit is tight. As a whimsy this is okay. I up my zero to a one.
regarding some deleted poem... 5-Feb-07/5:59 AM
Are you actually trying to write poetry?
I only ask because you are so bad at it, that you must be having some sort of a private joke with your postings. I am a bit curious as to your intentions.
regarding some deleted poem... 7-Feb-07/7:13 AM
Aside from a least one spelling error, (you might try using spell-check. I use to my great advantage [It almost makes me appear educated.]; some people really get their butts out of whack when a letter is left off or placed in the wrong spot.) , this is really a fine piece. Thanks.
regarding some deleted poem... 8-Feb-07/4:12 PM
Does not even make it to the lowest form of greeting card.
regarding some deleted poem... 10-Feb-07/7:10 AM
YOU ARE WELCOME TO STAY THERE!
regarding some deleted poem... 14-Feb-07/5:09 PM
Is this the best you can do, or is this the best you want to do? Not just this post, but the other two as well are really rather poorly done.
regarding some deleted poem... 16-Feb-07/7:04 AM
thanks. but. no.
regarding some deleted poem... 3-Mar-07/4:32 AM
nigh unto scent a mint
simple but half way good
regarding some deleted poem... 8-Mar-07/6:05 AM
A good capture. So you can write good stuff sometimes. What a surprise!
regarding some deleted poem... 17-Apr-07/5:16 PM
Don't know what happened. rockmage
regarding some deleted poem... 11-May-07/7:22 AM
interesting approach, but no go
regarding some deleted poem... 4-Jun-07/7:07 AM
Chinese fortune cookie?
regarding some deleted poem... 5-Jun-07/8:52 AM
5-7-5 But who counts?
regarding some deleted poem... 8-Jun-07/6:59 PM
One for the angst.
regarding some deleted poem... 10-Jul-07/8:07 AM
‘Claiming Everest’ does not seem to have anything to do with its title. It is similar, quite similar, to Dovina’s ‘Miles Apart, You Say’ and equally bad. I am very sorry to say.
regarding some deleted poem... 4-Aug-07/6:21 AM
You really Think This is a poetry?
regarding some deleted poem... 14-Aug-07/5:32 PM
snort chuckle 'blows nose' tosses tissue
regarding some deleted poem... 31-Aug-07/8:25 AM
sick bugger
regarding some deleted poem... 16-Sep-07/5:35 PM
toke a few more and you will think you had
regarding some deleted poem... 21-Sep-07/7:29 AM
Unrequited love of self?


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