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22 Jan 2004, 3:54 PM
Only If You Paint Your Toes In Rainbow Colours!
on some deleted poem
22 Jan 2004, 3:56 PM
The DOVE of PEACE sure is a bitch, ain't it?
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22 Jan 2004, 4:08 PM
Very disturbing.
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22 Jan 2004, 4:13 PM
Forgetfullnes is such a tasty deal.
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22 Jan 2004, 4:16 PM
L10 For you r body, mine does yearn... you r (intentional), if so, an interesting oneness.
Hot and horney.
Hot and horney.
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23 Jan 2004, 12:10 PM
Suicide Soup?
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23 Jan 2004, 9:59 PM
Nice take on an old saw. Sure as hell hate the price of your champange!
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23 Jan 2004, 10:01 PM
Belch and let it out. Gets rid of the bloat.
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23 Jan 2004, 12:14 PM
Good example of bad poetry.
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23 Jan 2004, 12:15 PM
So many words to say so little.
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22 Jan 2004, 6:13 PM
A trifle overdone.
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24 Jan 2004, 1:03 PM
Tis True.
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24 Jan 2004, 2:39 PM
L5...A gasp sp quiet... sp---so?
And then again I see the whole stanza is skewed. Just to Jar?
And then again I see the whole stanza is skewed. Just to Jar?
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24 Jan 2004, 2:41 PM
Again the deliberate Jar? World floating away on the 3 missing sylabals?
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24 Jan 2004, 6:17 PM
Okay! But does it actually work?
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26 Jan 2004, 10:54 AM
Your second stanza is great.
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26 Jan 2004, 10:59 AM
Tragedy and fair snoozing... a good mix.
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26 Jan 2004, 12:52 PM
Last Stanza terrible! Last line...you could have done better.
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26 Jan 2004, 12:54 PM
Politics aside, this is not too bad.
on some deleted poem
26 Jan 2004, 12:55 PM
For making me laugh!!