regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jan-04/3:54 PM
Only If You Paint Your Toes In Rainbow Colours!
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jan-04/3:56 PM
The DOVE of PEACE sure is a bitch, ain't it?
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jan-04/4:08 PM
Very disturbing.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jan-04/4:13 PM
Forgetfullnes is such a tasty deal.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jan-04/4:16 PM
L10 For you r body, mine does yearn... you r (intentional), if so, an interesting oneness. Hot and horney.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jan-04/6:13 PM
A trifle overdone.
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Jan-04/12:10 PM
Suicide Soup?
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Jan-04/12:14 PM
Good example of bad poetry.
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Jan-04/12:15 PM
So many words to say so little.
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Jan-04/9:59 PM
Nice take on an old saw. Sure as hell hate the price of your champange!
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Jan-04/10:01 PM
Belch and let it out. Gets rid of the bloat.
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Jan-04/1:03 PM
Tis True.
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Jan-04/2:39 PM
L5...A gasp sp quiet... sp---so? And then again I see the whole stanza is skewed. Just to Jar?
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Jan-04/2:41 PM
Again the deliberate Jar? World floating away on the 3 missing sylabals?
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Jan-04/6:17 PM
Okay! But does it actually work?
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Jan-04/10:54 AM
Your second stanza is great.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Jan-04/10:59 AM
Tragedy and fair snoozing... a good mix.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Jan-04/12:52 PM
Last Stanza terrible! Last line...you could have done better.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Jan-04/12:54 PM
Politics aside, this is not too bad.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Jan-04/12:55 PM
For making me laugh!!