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29 Jan 2004, 1:56 PM
Much more of an Ode.
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29 Jan 2004, 2:36 PM
Rather Blah! Forgive yourself.
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26 Jan 2004, 1:22 PM
Pretty good! And funny is a sad way.
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26 Jan 2004, 1:23 PM
Eternal hope, hopefully not dashed.
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26 Jan 2004, 1:25 PM
Rather BLEEK.
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28 Jan 2004, 11:08 AM
Got to watch out for the Blue Jays!
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28 Jan 2004, 11:09 AM
Slow down... your going to fast. It's alright to use a spell checker sometimes.
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28 Jan 2004, 11:10 AM
Yep! Leaves do fall
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28 Jan 2004, 12:11 PM
There is no reason for your mixed grammer in this poem.
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28 Jan 2004, 12:14 PM
Don't like Cheese? You realize it is mold?
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28 Jan 2004, 1:40 PM
Arteries hardening? I like your strawberry lips.
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29 Jan 2004, 8:50 AM
Not up to your usual. But good none-the-less.
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29 Jan 2004, 1:45 PM
Sob!
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29 Jan 2004, 2:38 PM
A lot of words. A lot more than you needed.
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29 Jan 2004, 3:55 PM
Not fond of comments Huh. This is still not up to your usual standards.
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31 Jan 2004, 8:16 AM
Not very good.
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31 Jan 2004, 8:32 AM
hmmmn
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31 Jan 2004, 8:34 AM
much too over done
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31 Jan 2004, 9:13 AM
I really enjoyed this. Well done.
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31 Jan 2004, 1:43 PM
wow