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2 Feb 2004, 12:11 AM
Shows tears well.
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31 Jan 2004, 1:57 PM
Particularly like... stock-broke potentate mummy bereft of organelles or tissue. Very stark.
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31 Jan 2004, 2:03 PM
Just noticed how many times you have zeroed me and left no comment as to why. Returning the favor.
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31 Jan 2004, 2:11 PM
creep creep creep
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1 Feb 2004, 10:15 AM
I like this a bunch.
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1 Feb 2004, 1:44 PM
Yes Critter. Yer showing talent!
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1 Feb 2004, 1:47 PM
Poor Critter! Your insults are still CRIPPLED! But, your love for me is touching none-the-less. Thank you. I feel BLESSED.
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2 Feb 2004, 12:05 AM
Good show.
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2 Feb 2004, 12:09 AM
A bit clichéd.
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2 Feb 2004, 7:51 AM
You can always end it now and save yourself years of disappointment. Not that I am suggesting anything.
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2 Feb 2004, 10:02 AM
Does not show hate. Merely desire of possession.
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2 Feb 2004, 11:26 AM
Kinda cute.
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2 Feb 2004, 11:29 AM
Almost like behind closed doors. Is this the aftermath?
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3 Feb 2004, 9:55 AM
The second stanza is great. Hell on reflection, the whole thing is great.
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3 Feb 2004, 9:40 AM
Nice light piece. Fluff but still....
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3 Feb 2004, 2:30 PM
Sweet Sentiment, but if falls short of being well put.
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3 Feb 2004, 4:32 PM
A bit insipid. Uninspired.
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3 Feb 2004, 4:33 PM
I can't make this sing.
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3 Feb 2004, 6:52 PM
Dreams of cakes and whatever they feast,
This line makes me stumble, probably because I don't see what it means. That being said, I was able to sing this in the traditional manner I sung my son to sleep. Very Good!
This line makes me stumble, probably because I don't see what it means. That being said, I was able to sing this in the traditional manner I sung my son to sleep. Very Good!
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3 Feb 2004, 6:56 PM
Written with just the right amount of presumed barefoot ignorance. Good Show!