on some deleted poem
4 Feb 2004, 12:47 PM
Poor jodpur. Misused. Unappreciated.
on some deleted poem
4 Feb 2004, 6:03 PM
Not exactly well put together. Nor is it a good song.
on some deleted poem
5 Feb 2004, 4:12 PM
Should have listed this as lyric. Good for a religious childrens song book.
on some deleted poem
5 Feb 2004, 4:14 PM
Did you mean addiction to a prostitute?
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5 Feb 2004, 7:17 PM
There there, I'm sure you'll find another spider.
on some deleted poem
5 Feb 2004, 7:50 PM
Scraping the bottom of the barrel for subject matter, are you?
on some deleted poem
6 Feb 2004, 9:13 AM
Actually at first glance I thought, "Naw. This is a leg puller." Then I read again. And again. While my leg feels much longer, I can't dismiss the feeling that this is good.
on some deleted poem
6 Feb 2004, 6:52 PM
rather poorly done
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7 Feb 2004, 12:20 PM
Chilling! Better Than Very Good. I have observed a similar reaction at a stock car race.
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7 Feb 2004, 9:05 PM
Would not care to be barefoot here. Nice image.
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8 Feb 2004, 2:55 PM
Does not quite do it.
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8 Feb 2004, 3:01 PM
Very good boy and his dog tale.
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10 Feb 2004, 7:50 AM
Shucks. there ain't no anonimity anymore. Blue is same as green. Still this bleads a little.
on some deleted poem
10 Feb 2004, 7:55 AM
Yep. That is what a poet is 'supposed' to be. It is a rare dead when someone steps up to the plate.
on some deleted poem
10 Feb 2004, 8:04 AM
Very nice.
on some deleted poem
10 Feb 2004, 8:13 AM
Wow! So Bleak!
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10 Feb 2004, 8:21 AM
Nice doggy.
on some deleted poem
10 Feb 2004, 6:49 PM
Such luxury, this blatant hedonism!
on some deleted poem
10 Feb 2004, 7:28 PM
L7...drugy cusion--- cousin?
Very good angst on angst.
Very good angst on angst.
on some deleted poem
11 Feb 2004, 10:08 AM
Shows a total lack of imagination.