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14 Feb 2004, 9:36 AM
Perhaps if you worked on this a bit.
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14 Feb 2004, 9:37 AM
Some good imagery.
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14 Feb 2004, 9:38 AM
Makes me cold.
on some deleted poem
11 Feb 2004, 10:55 AM
More a short story than a poem, but a very good one.
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11 Feb 2004, 10:58 AM
All these lonely people... a huge club it is.
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16 Feb 2004, 11:36 AM
Just as bad as the one before.
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11 Feb 2004, 1:42 PM
Is there a contest for lonely poems? Not that I want to write them, but there are so many, it seems there should be. Anyhow, as lonely poems go, this one is great.
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11 Feb 2004, 4:30 PM
I like it. You are getting better.
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11 Feb 2004, 6:39 PM
Certainly fits the title.
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12 Feb 2004, 4:53 PM
A little inspiration can be all it takes
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14 Feb 2004, 9:28 AM
Does not quite gell.
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16 Feb 2004, 10:35 AM
cute
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16 Feb 2004, 10:41 AM
hmmmn.
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16 Feb 2004, 10:51 AM
good perspective nice grate
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16 Feb 2004, 9:30 PM
Continue the search.
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28 Feb 2004, 11:39 AM
Very funny! Nice expansion to contraction.
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28 Feb 2004, 11:41 AM
Interesting song.
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28 Feb 2004, 11:42 AM
Sayest Lah Veee!
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28 Feb 2004, 11:43 AM
hmmmn
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28 Feb 2004, 11:44 AM
Very cute!