on some deleted poem
28 Feb 2004, 11:47 AM
Nice cat!
on some deleted poem
28 Feb 2004, 12:29 PM
Good rythm.
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28 Feb 2004, 12:33 PM
Don't know about this one. It seems forced or maybe too playful.
on some deleted poem
28 Feb 2004, 12:42 PM
trite. subject not personalized enough.
on some deleted poem
29 Feb 2004, 10:37 AM
cute
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29 Feb 2004, 10:59 AM
stammer stutter flip flop hey, that is not what I meant to say.
on some deleted poem
1 Mar 2004, 10:40 AM
cabin fever hey hey hey
on some deleted poem
3 Mar 2004, 11:35 AM
Fantastic!
on some deleted poem
3 Mar 2004, 11:36 AM
Very nice!
on some deleted poem
3 Mar 2004, 11:38 AM
In fact, better than nice. You have shown genius here.
on some deleted poem
3 Mar 2004, 12:02 PM
pretty heavy grief
on some deleted poem
3 Mar 2004, 12:06 PM
good melencholy
on some deleted poem
3 Mar 2004, 3:15 PM
A little jerky.
Just an opinion.
Just an opinion.
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5 Mar 2004, 8:48 AM
This should go back to the... I don't know what it should go back to, but it is not good.
on some deleted poem
5 Mar 2004, 8:50 AM
Cold
on some deleted poem
5 Mar 2004, 8:51 AM
Needs a bit of filling in. No feeling of lingering.
on some deleted poem
5 Mar 2004, 8:59 AM
I don't quite get this one. I seem to see a grave occupied by a spider-bitten person doing a dance.
on some deleted poem
8 Mar 2004, 8:21 AM
Really nice last stanza.
on some deleted poem
8 Mar 2004, 8:32 AM
Simple. Should make a good song.
on some deleted poem
8 Mar 2004, 8:59 AM
masterbation