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17 Oct 2003, 10:37 PM
Never saw a purple sunset. Tis another song.
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17 Oct 2003, 10:41 PM
L2-pushed to the side to vanishes....?????
L(-I desirer from you...desire?
Very good self pity. I don't understand line 2. Sorry!
L(-I desirer from you...desire?
Very good self pity. I don't understand line 2. Sorry!
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18 Oct 2003, 10:05 AM
L22---flesh and steal...steel? Though I do like the whap I get at the image in the way you have spelled it.
Your yearning comes across strong.
Your yearning comes across strong.
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18 Oct 2003, 10:17 AM
OOOO! and OOOOOO!!!! I like this. I have so much trouble thinking and judging how to view and express. This looks to be an invaluable aide. *** APPLAUSE! ***
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18 Oct 2003, 7:15 PM
L6---This is unwelcome here...What is unwelcome?
I can't tell if this is self-pity or bragging. The message is very mixed.
I can't tell if this is self-pity or bragging. The message is very mixed.
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18 Oct 2003, 7:17 PM
Ah. I see. You are metamorphosing.
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19 Oct 2003, 8:39 AM
Very good humor!
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19 Oct 2003, 8:52 AM
Your sense of humor is excellent.
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19 Oct 2003, 1:22 PM
Beware the Brick!
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19 Oct 2003, 11:10 PM
Damn! I don't want to be there!
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20 Oct 2003, 9:10 AM
The sentiment is good.
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20 Oct 2003, 8:09 PM
The last verse makes worth the reading of the first two, though, you could have left off all but the last and had a much better poem.
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20 Oct 2003, 8:07 PM
I very much enjoyed this. It was hard to read aloud, as I kept interrupting myself with laughter.
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20 Oct 2003, 8:16 PM
Definitely singable. I can see Mr. Rogers crooning this to his shoe.
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20 Oct 2003, 8:23 PM
Very good. Wonderful images. I like the comparison made between the last verse and the rest.
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21 Oct 2003, 10:16 AM
There is just no understanding (to me) the why of the popular idols. Seen Elvis lately. Perhaps it is because there are no moral issues or admonishment involved.
Good question, Well asked!
Good question, Well asked!
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21 Oct 2003, 6:13 PM
All that is missing is majestic music!
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21 Oct 2003, 8:49 PM
:0) I was worried about that poor crab, now it's a bite. Your images are fantasic as usual. 23.49
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21 Oct 2003, 8:51 PM
A nice needy love poem with zing!
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21 Oct 2003, 8:53 PM
I liked the 4th stanza. The rest does not live up to it.