on some deleted poem
15 Oct 2003, 10:21 AM
This is funny. I know this is not polite, but it reminds me of a fart.
on some deleted poem
15 Oct 2003, 10:24 AM
Yes! It Is Weak!
on some deleted poem
15 Oct 2003, 10:33 AM
What ever you said (I won't pretend to understand), it kept my attention from the start. You said it well, whatever it was.
on some deleted poem
15 Oct 2003, 10:35 AM
A truely wonderful song. You make the boredom zing.
on some deleted poem
15 Oct 2003, 10:43 AM
Just a simple complaint! Does not make a good poem. Where is the angst. Not even a good insult!
on some deleted poem
16 Oct 2003, 7:47 AM
Greed is greed. Why slave to the #? Silly!
on some deleted poem
16 Oct 2003, 8:45 AM
Definite impression of fun and the having of it. Good Job. Good image.
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2003, 2:13 AM
I smile and Smile. I even giggled on cue.
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2003, 2:18 AM
"A very sad song,â I whispered to me.
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2003, 2:22 AM
Somehow the imagery did not flow 'right' for me. I have no advice as to how to make it do so.
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2003, 2:23 AM
Way too bland!
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2003, 9:05 AM
Man above, gods below? This is hard to encompass. Large is small and small is large and back again. I get a bit queasy.
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2003, 9:19 AM
Wow! Very wistful!
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2003, 9:00 PM
The second time reading through aloud, the outrage came through strong and hard, ready to erupt.
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2003, 9:43 PM
Happy Birthday slightly delayed!!!
I'll be 56 in a couple of months. Things don't change. Smiling is best. I can't always do that.
I'll be 56 in a couple of months. Things don't change. Smiling is best. I can't always do that.
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2003, 10:23 PM
Does this mean Hell's fire is getting dimmer?
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2003, 10:26 PM
This fits the lyric category. Read it a couple of times out loud. The music is there.
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2003, 10:30 PM
Like a groom to his/her virgin wife on wedding night, nervousness before the consummation..
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2003, 10:31 PM
Simply and well said.
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2003, 10:34 PM
I'm starting to get cross-eyed. Lovers.