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10 Oct 2003, 8:43 PM
I suspected something different in the beginning. This caught me of guard. Very good. Very chilling!
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10 Oct 2003, 12:35 PM
I am in awe of your imagery.
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9 Oct 2003, 8:22 AM
You are a master of the chill! I thought at first dipsy kismet and then I thought stalker and then back to fate. Delicious bit of (I thought Irony, but that certainly is not the word.)
on some deleted poem
9 Oct 2003, 8:37 AM
I am disgusted to the extreme with this character. Mayhaps sympathy was trying to be evoked. I did not feel it.
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9 Oct 2003, 12:23 PM
This one I just found boring.
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9 Oct 2003, 12:29 PM
Within a dang... Is that like 'don't give a dang (slang for damn)?
Even if it is a typo, this just does not do it for me. I am clearly not smart enough for the last line.
Even if it is a typo, this just does not do it for me. I am clearly not smart enough for the last line.
on some deleted poem
9 Oct 2003, 2:24 PM
Don't know what a Jonquil is.
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9 Oct 2003, 2:26 PM
Good capture "i feel old..."
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9 Oct 2003, 4:33 PM
and apple peels hang noses... I an't help but laugh. Nice image.
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9 Oct 2003, 6:51 PM
Reincarnation with a twist. You are your own soul Mate?
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9 Oct 2003, 10:29 PM
This only grated. Only annoyed.
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9 Oct 2003, 10:30 PM
Redundant and trite.
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9 Oct 2003, 10:43 PM
Too many we's. Too much demanded acceptance of poet's view.
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9 Oct 2003, 10:59 PM
The warmth of felt. ... Nice touch.
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10 Oct 2003, 4:29 PM
Nicely and humorously done.
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10 Oct 2003, 4:47 PM
Haiku is way beyound me, so I can not comment on form. It does make me feel sadness for both parties with the few words you used.
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10 Oct 2003, 5:01 PM
I have heard this all before...endlessly by lots of people. So what if it is lyrical?
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10 Oct 2003, 8:25 PM
. TGT AAA ACG ACG GCC AGT. M13-47. CGC
CAG GGT TTT CCC AGT CAC GAC. M13-REV4. TCA CAC AGG AAA CAG CTA TGA C. --- Not being versed in genetics, I got this off the net.
I think your poem is very funny. Is your code hopelessly scrambled or do you have a pattern in it?
Regardless, have a 10.
CAG GGT TTT CCC AGT CAC GAC. M13-REV4. TCA CAC AGG AAA CAG CTA TGA C. --- Not being versed in genetics, I got this off the net.
I think your poem is very funny. Is your code hopelessly scrambled or do you have a pattern in it?
Regardless, have a 10.
on some deleted poem
11 Oct 2003, 12:11 PM
Just testing to see if a message by me is sent to me.
on some deleted poem
11 Oct 2003, 10:23 PM
I can't quite tell if this is telling someone off and expecting a continued relationship or it is a very long good-bye, don't let the door slam too hard on your backside as you get going kind of thing. It is certainly nicely said... both in execution and choice of language.
A gentle farewell? A polite go to hell? Or knowing my abilty to miss the point, neither or both.
Have a 10.
A gentle farewell? A polite go to hell? Or knowing my abilty to miss the point, neither or both.
Have a 10.