poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Wobble McFly

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on some deleted poem 23 Oct 2003, 3:19 AM
Ha ha ha ha

-10-

Excellent use of letters to form words.
on Warm Piss Bath by kingit 23 Oct 2003, 3:20 AM
You forgot to turn these random words into a Poeme

on some deleted poem 23 Oct 2003, 3:21 AM
TTHHIISS IISS RRUUBBIISSHH -10-
on untitled by J.B. Manning 23 Oct 2003, 3:27 AM
bones/hormones

break me/shake me

game/name

prawne/porn

WELL DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -2-
on Rush by J.B. Manning 23 Oct 2003, 3:28 AM
GAY
on Tipspit by kingit 30 Oct 2003, 1:22 AM
This poem sounds really good when you persuade a slightly deaf disabled old man, port-sodden like so many of his ancient tribe, to recite it directly into your ear canal using a method of recitation known as "shouting".
on some deleted poem 30 Oct 2003, 1:24 AM
"to the tune of "All You Need is Love" by Cliff Richard"

Is this a joke!?????!?!??! LOL ASL?!?!?!

The aforesaid song was sung not by Sir Clifford but rather by the Small Rolling Beatle Kink Faces.
on The meaning of Love by The Slender Blade 30 Oct 2003, 1:25 AM
"I can accept closure,
But not indecent exposure."

These two lines are sheer genius. The rest is cack.
on Angel by Butterfly1120 30 Oct 2003, 1:27 AM
Change the last line to this:

"God sent me an angel, I just call her Motherfucker"

Such an amendment would serve to lend the poem one more layer of polytextual poignality.
on Where did you go? by Butterfly1120 30 Oct 2003, 1:29 AM
Had you been "deflowered" yet?
on Who I am by Butterfly1120 30 Oct 2003, 1:33 AM
OMG LOL ASL!??!??!??!!!
on Fading Freindships by BuffysBack419 30 Oct 2003, 1:38 AM
Stunning. This piece works really well when recited in a heavy Indian accent. -10-
on Megan by RaVensEternalFire 30 Oct 2003, 1:39 AM
Change the last word from "soul" to "ass". -10-
on Love by EouSou 30 Oct 2003, 1:40 AM
Making love to a child
Starts out by just a kiss

I'm not sure I approve of your pederastic activities, sir!!!!!!
on some deleted poem 5 Nov 2003, 5:40 AM
The board assembled of the mind

Advertising executives
Marketing
Public Relations
Lawyers
Accounting

All calmly discussing strategy.

Why is the writer huddled silently in his chair
Projecting distaste towards Flash Bedazzle's flapping gums?
Why doesn’t he just punch Flash in his ungodly white teeth?

Is the writer a pussy
Or does he just agree with what's being said?
on Saint Peggy Seeger by Retaliate 5 Nov 2003, 5:41 AM
Our Lady of Fiery Rhetoric!
Guide us in this time of trouble!

Let us sing
The Song of Choice

Our Lady of Burning Righteousness!

Joan of Arc incarnate,
Patron Saint of Passion,
Light the way with your fury!
on Fathers by amielou82 5 Nov 2003, 5:43 AM
Please tell me which of the following names you apply to your father:

(a) Father
(b) Dad
(c) Pops
(d) Pater
(e) Fuck face
(f) All of the above
(g) None of the above

Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????!?!?!111
on Through DUSK till DAWN by ShaNoN+960317485 5 Nov 2003, 5:44 AM
Dare should i call it a poem - nay. Its my tribute for all the wonders of this world that i have never seen nor felt in person, but came to love & cherish through the books i hath read in my childhood; as they were my only link to understand the plant & beauty lacking in Maldives. Thank you GOD & friends for allowing me to remember the names so i can write this, MY DREAM & my evolution to love the beauty in the folds of the night.
on On Visiting My Father by sliver 5 Nov 2003, 5:48 AM
Poemeranker has been flooded with a deluge of "dad" and "dead dad" poems in recent days.

I refer you to the hugely poignant poem "Fathers" by amielou82:

http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=73528

Full marks for keeping to this socially important theme!

-10-
on intent to refrain by skaskowski 5 Nov 2003, 5:49 AM
This poem sounds really good when you persuade a slightly deaf disabled old man, port-sodden like so many of his ancient tribe, to recite it directly into your ear canal using a method of recitation known as "shouting".