Re: girl of eden [the shotgun approach] by boogah	10-Aug-02/4:48 PM
nice title, nice concept, shitty poem!
Re: Stranded by Antares42	10-Aug-02/4:46 PM
the concept is good, thought a bit over done, but your rhyme scheme and weak language ruin any chance of it being remotly poetic!
Re: WANTED by JanieDoe	10-Aug-02/4:40 PM
nice, but please don't tell me how to read it!
Re: You are the Rain by emilyowey	5-Aug-02/8:53 AM
nice try, have you ever hear the word cliche?
Re: Reality by ThoughtfulSoul	5-Aug-02/8:51 AM
i don't like the poem, but props for the subject matter
Re: Wife beater t-shirt by bondjedi	4-Aug-02/8:34 PM
i like it
Re: Orange by lindseyis	4-Aug-02/7:55 PM
nice imagry and a play with line breaks might be good
Re: Thoughts for Later (v3) by nentwined	4-Aug-02/7:54 PM
cliche and boring