on Green by tiamat
2 Jan 2004, 5:31 PM
This is awsome, i really like it, you don't follow any 'rules' of poetry, which I love, good work
on Justifications by Evening
2 Jan 2004, 5:33 PM
This is GREAT! I can totally relate to it, keep up yhe good work
on somewhere between alpha and omega by crin
2 Jan 2004, 5:34 PM
It's pretty good, I don't understand it, which is proubly what you're going for, so good job
on Dispersion by timfowler
2 Jan 2004, 5:36 PM
I don't really like this one, I dunno why, and I wish I did so maybe it's help you, but I'm not that great, so don't listen to what I think
on Worshipping the Porclin God by Derge
2 Jan 2004, 5:40 PM
This was fun to read and I really liked it
on Whose God? by elizabethann
2 Jan 2004, 5:42 PM
NICE! I think god sucks ass, so I see me and you are on the same page, please read my poem "where was god" and give me your thoughts
on O Death by lastobelus
2 Jan 2004, 6:45 PM
remember me, im the dude who wrote 'where was god', well it's my quite firm belife that There is no god to question, he doesn't exist...i bet you would love to know that i work at a Planned Parenthood office, If you liked that one, read this
New commandments
Your extinct god
Will bow down before me and call himself a fraud
And tell your poor abused children that I will end the animosity
I will be the one to set them free
The new ten commandments go as follows
He who prays, also wallows
Tho shalt not commit a crime
To buy your extinct god time
Tho shall destroy all idols
Tho shall burn every bible
Tho shall dine in thy own mercy
As soon as they can kill me
Tho shall sin in my name
And tho shall treat life as a game
Tho shalt not rape thy mother
Tho shalt not love thy brother
For the final preparation
To assure the restoration
Tho shall sing for satan
To give back all you have taken
New commandments
Your extinct god
Will bow down before me and call himself a fraud
And tell your poor abused children that I will end the animosity
I will be the one to set them free
The new ten commandments go as follows
He who prays, also wallows
Tho shalt not commit a crime
To buy your extinct god time
Tho shall destroy all idols
Tho shall burn every bible
Tho shall dine in thy own mercy
As soon as they can kill me
Tho shall sin in my name
And tho shall treat life as a game
Tho shalt not rape thy mother
Tho shalt not love thy brother
For the final preparation
To assure the restoration
Tho shall sing for satan
To give back all you have taken
on Just-Average-Zongs-Zung by tralala42001
4 Jan 2004, 5:44 PM
this poem was so confusing it's great
on one true love (beta test) by crwncka1
4 Jan 2004, 5:48 PM
Wow, thats all i can say
on Internet Prisoner by avwiz71
4 Jan 2004, 5:49 PM
dude, this should be a song, it's real great
on Searching... by kissmeufool58
4 Jan 2004, 5:50 PM
it has a sweet nothing to it that makes it ring
on The Spark by unknown
4 Jan 2004, 5:56 PM
kinda confusing, so it's pretty good
on CAUTION: VAMPIRE ZONE... by TanHand
4 Jan 2004, 6:05 PM
Holy crap man, thats awesome, never let anyone tell you to change it in any way, cuz it's perfect the way it is
on some deleted poem
4 Jan 2004, 6:06 PM
ok, i hate rap, which doesn't mean this is bad, just not my taste
on Anniversary Poem by Blindpoetry
4 Jan 2004, 6:07 PM
you should do something for her just cuz you love her so much don't you think?
on The Service by forestchild7
4 Jan 2004, 6:09 PM
it's dark and almost morbid. Pretty good