on St. Germain & The Charismatically Uncomitted by <{Baba^Yaga}>
25 Aug 2002, 10:19 AM
This story is a festival of jocularity. It's sooo long, I don't know how you gentlemen get through the editing of these Epics. How these visions appear in your mind will also always be a mystery for me. My imaginations looks extremely jejune and humdrum standing next to yours. I going to assume you meant to spell Germain Germane, so this is pretty much flawless. I love the pageantry of it. I'm glad I took the time to read it. It broke the morning's tedium, and put a smile on my face. Thanks. 10
on Turnarounds by dilips_10
24 Aug 2002, 2:01 PM
I made a mistake. "amyn" is suppose to be many. Honestly!
on Turnarounds by dilips_10
24 Aug 2002, 1:58 PM
Honesty makes up for so amyn mistakes. 8
on constructed word poem #6 by david
24 Aug 2002, 10:52 AM
silent but hesitant doesn't gell. can't something be silent and hesitant? otherwise 7
on she did not by mitchski
24 Aug 2002, 10:43 AM
Her eyes seemed borrowed conveys alot of information. I appriciate that kind of frugality. In my overly critized oppinion this could be a better short story then poem. On second thought your use of {she does not,I did not} wouldn't translate. oh well keep it up. 7
on THEIR MOCCASINS by ani
24 Aug 2002, 10:19 AM
This is really swett,. You should develop it into a story. It has the ring of Lore to it. I'd love to see you add some more scenes of the couple together in their first life. You know, little vignettes. 10
on Tainted by necroscope7
24 Aug 2002, 10:08 AM
the thing I like best is your descreetness it not stating what the taintor is, Could be any kind of vice. You'll has a typo and mixing of the metaphors clean with fire is considered wrong in most circles but if you're comfortable with it then leave it. 7
on Black Buns by Bachus
24 Aug 2002, 9:05 AM
This wetback spic thinks your writing loves her. Esos monos negros son unos pinchi putos! Ole!
on The Ultimate~Creep goes to Mecca! by Bachus
24 Aug 2002, 8:42 AM
Contributing to truth telling is a vile and irresponsible thing to do. Soon the state will be forced to crash land in your living room for upsetting the local livestock. They've been eating less and less of the Company chow. Ummm. There's nothing like ma's microwave reheating. She can peel back the film like no other. No thanks, I'll have dinner in my own room again tonight, I don't want to watch what you're watching. There's a story on E! about a crazy cyber-poet who died mysteriously of an overdose. No, I don't believe in conspiracy theories. He was a lunatic nobody, and the people who chatted with him on Das Internet say he was bound to self distruct, anyone could tell he had mental problems. I don't want to miss it
on Why I want to kill Opie by Bachus
24 Aug 2002, 1:58 AM
not a poem but great. Facista anyone?
on The box by Ming T. Merciless
24 Aug 2002, 1:36 AM
Bemuda?????
on My days work by lucky_cmc
24 Aug 2002, 1:16 AM
permit me to say this is barely articulate, if you want to get anywhere close to poetry. You're going to have to pay the big bucks. Cause after writing this you'll be lucky if they'll even allow you to read it. 0
on Poem Ranker by abecedarian
24 Aug 2002, 1:12 AM
excellent, you shall certainly be remembered as an under-achiever, I mean underappreciated bardolater. 6
on The train by Art Glocken
24 Aug 2002, 1:04 AM
how many chuffs when things go as scheduled? 4
on Three Daughters by <~>
24 Aug 2002, 1:00 AM
I haven't seen such a pretty lyric since the French stormed the Bastille. May I memorize this. You will get all the credit. 10