as i have said before, this poem was written years ago..about how i once felt, but not anymore. I realize that this may not have been the best poem to present on this site, but whats done is done. I cant go back & re-do it. I thought the poem expressed that time in my life well, but obviously this was one that was meant to stay "for my eyes only". My thanks for your constructive critisism.

yes, i know :)

actually since my poetry seems to offend your delicate senses, its probably a good thing that i dont write very often. The 2 poem i have on here were written years ago. I only posted them to see what others might think. I knew there would be reviews such as yours & others. But since you dont believe that poetry is about thoughts or feelings, please enlighten me as to what poetry really is, in your opinion

thank-you for your advise...however, if i did that it would not be MY poem anymore, but merely words taken from someone else. :)

thank-you..i will look into it..as i am new to most poetry terms, it will take some time to find which type best suits my poetry.

thank-you for the advice..i welcome it. Life is a forever learning process :)

well..what is poetry if not a reflection of ourselves & our emotions?

nope..i dont look like an ape..i'm bald & have buck teeth...LOL (j/k)..thanks ;)

thank-you..now if only you had been my Lit. teacher when i was in school ;)

thank-you very much :)

no...but if you find it on one of her albums please let me know so i can contact her about royalties..lol