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Make Love to Me

Member since 2004 · Posted 25 Jan 2004 · 12 comments

Make Love to Me with more than just lips and hands. Make Love to Me as should be between a woman and a man. Put heart and soul within your touch bring out the feelings I want to share so much. I want to feel more than just skin bring forth the fires that burn within. Make Love to Me so i may feel like a woman, whole. Make Love to Me with body, heart & soul!

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[2] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 25-Jan-04/1:55 PM Reply

"I was unable to control myself. As I passed him on the gangplank, I shook my fist in his face. 'You pathetic duffer! There isn't a crew! Why don't you just admit that you're a lonely failure? Why continue with this demeaning charade?'

At my outburst, his tears changed colour and flowed the more. He flung his arms over his eyes and rushed below deck, beard dripping with the dew of misery."

'Rawhead & Bloody Bones', by Rhys H. Hughes

[9] penguin fiend 25-Jan-04/5:37 PM Reply

I LOVE it, I'm only giving you a 9 cuz I wish I wrote it

[n/a] drumrgirl30 › penguin fiend 26-Jan-04/8:29 AM Reply

thank-you very much :)

[10] clumseYdaiseY 26-Jan-04/12:39 AM Reply

superb! give u an A++ :)

[n/a] drumrgirl30 › clumseYdaiseY 26-Jan-04/8:30 AM Reply

thank-you..now if only you had been my Lit. teacher when i was in school ;)

[n/a] Christof 26-Jan-04/5:50 AM Reply

No no no. Wasn't this copied off the back of a Shania Twain album?

[n/a] drumrgirl30 › Christof 26-Jan-04/8:28 AM Reply

no...but if you find it on one of her albums please let me know so i can contact her about royalties..lol

[n/a] titan69 26-Jan-04/1:29 PM Reply

I would do if you didnt look like an ape?

Just kidding 9/10

[n/a] drumrgirl30 › titan69 26-Jan-04/6:31 PM Reply

nope..i dont look like an ape..i'm bald & have buck teeth...LOL (j/k)..thanks ;)

[1] andrewjthomas 26-Jan-04/7:42 PM Reply

"body, heart & soul"???
come on, i know you know that this has got to be the worlds most cliche word combo
don't you know this???
ugh, this is putrid

[n/a] drumrgirl30 › andrewjthomas 27-Jan-04/6:30 AM Reply

yes, i know :)

[7] Dovina 17-Jun-05/8:02 PM Reply

Omit "so much" from Verse 3 and this is pretty good.