on Hate the Contestant by Blindpoetry
13 Feb 2005, 1:26 AM
i commend anyone anti-moore. i may not like Bush, but as an inspiring film maker you have to hate a jackass who puts himself into others peoples stories.
on Valentine's Day is Two Days Away and I Don't Feel Loved by MacFrantic
13 Feb 2005, 1:24 AM
i like the first stanze, but it is all a little too random for me...though i admit to being just as random.
replying on Haiku: The Legend Continues by brazen
20 Jun 2003, 8:28 AM
R I G H T
replying on time weights by brazen
23 May 2003, 1:58 AM
but it is a step above polish glow-in-the-dark sundials
replying on time weights by brazen
23 May 2003, 1:10 AM
hmm...seems you are quite right in that fact. the point i was aiming for was for "deeds undone" to reflect the past and "tasks left at hand" to reflect the future, but it is a bit to vague. i'm still working on it, so i'll try and tighten that confusion up next.
replying on all is yet to come (version 2) by brazen
10 May 2003, 12:42 AM
explain harsh, because i'm guessing you mean harsh as in "brash" and "unpoetic", though you've previously stated it as being "mean". i just need the clarity for perfection
replying on all is yet to come (version 2) by brazen
6 May 2003, 10:17 PM
its ok...save the criticism for when i'm done. i was trying to finish it before i passed out on the keyboard but couldn't quite make it, and my laziness prompted me to submit instead of open notepad and save it. i'll try and finish it within the next couple days
replying on moments lost in adversity by brazen
29 Apr 2003, 10:40 PM
...of course meaning the whole religion thing...not me being an idiot.
replying on moments lost in adversity by brazen
29 Apr 2003, 10:39 PM
and today we celebrate yet another genuine moment of hitting a nail directly on its head...congratulations, friend.
replying on Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin
29 Apr 2003, 10:37 PM
its ok...you just finished the line that i was actually quoting from the movie...which one is worse is up to reality to decide.
on Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin
28 Apr 2003, 11:16 PM
Clatu Verata N... N... it's an 'N' word. N... N... It's definitely an "N" word!
on The Adulterous by Caducus
1 Apr 2003, 8:39 AM
we may not be Christ, but its safe to say that every-so-often i am God.
on Perversions 4: Kink in Space by razorgrin
12 Feb 2003, 5:03 AM
golly, mister
on My suicide note was short and sweet by horus8
12 Feb 2003, 4:30 AM
too bad all i had was an extension cord left over from finally taking down my christmas lights
on Starving at Tiffany's by horus8
12 Feb 2003, 4:28 AM
unfortunately due to salary cap restrictions, the cather was traded to the corn. i'd like to say thank you to all those fans out that stuck with me and wish me luck with me new team...
replying on Starving at Tiffany's by horus8
12 Feb 2003, 4:27 AM
damn you...even just reading those 4 lines managed to get the song stuck in my head for longer then i would have liked...goddamn it.
apparently, if i was junk food i'd be a cheeseball.