on some deleted poem
4 Dec 2002, 10:06 AM
Is this about god?
on some deleted poem
6 Dec 2002, 10:24 PM
I see Settle has been at it again. DA will you blow him already.
on Sense of drpression by Sugarbbybuttrfly
6 Dec 2002, 9:51 PM
What does "cuz" mean? Pimple poem.
on Like a Father by confuzdlilgirl
6 Dec 2002, 9:56 PM
Is this person in jail?
on The way they used to be by Sugarbbybuttrfly
6 Dec 2002, 9:59 PM
Pimple poem deluxe.
on The generosity of others. by darby pyn
6 Dec 2002, 10:04 PM
Obviously just another punk song.
on some deleted poem
6 Dec 2002, 10:07 PM
I get lost in all the useless language. Adjectives and adverbs everywhere.
on some deleted poem
6 Dec 2002, 10:08 PM
Write me a love poem dickhead.
on Playing Games by ThoughtfulSoul
6 Dec 2002, 10:11 PM
Pimple poem with fries.
on some deleted poem
6 Dec 2002, 10:26 PM
What is a smurf?
on some deleted poem
6 Dec 2002, 11:07 PM
I really like "chaste to be chased", but I think you should change the title of the poem to "Holy Shit Batman!! Look at these adjectives."
on Hunt <3 by Plasticgirlwithgun
6 Dec 2002, 11:30 PM
What does less than 3 mean? Is that like 1 or 2? Oh, I see, it is about sleeping with less than three guys and really wanting to just sleep with one but being secretly afraid of the responsilbilities of commitment? Am I in the neighborhood? This is deep, black head stuff!!!
on Happy Cancer! by Agemo-Z
6 Dec 2002, 8:53 PM
Thank you ever so much for making this the ninth poem written in honor of my work here. I believe that officially takes the cake. It is amazing the depths one will sink to show the lack of integrity.
on idiots by w~* ATHENA *~w
6 Dec 2002, 8:47 AM
Do you ever write anything yourself or have you simply developed a keen ability to cut and paste.
How long did this take to write? And exactly what are you shooting for? Reaction? Abstraction? Realism? Surrealism? Warholism? Gymnasium? Is this the individual proletariats response to oppression in the work place? A response to a bar rejection? A failing grade? What do you mean. Do you want to start a revolution? Or are you just a young boy with nothing better to do and loads suburban angst?
on just another punk song by darby pyn
4 Dec 2002, 9:12 AM
In this effort are you confusing punk song with say, hardcore song (you youngsters always seem to confuse the two),? Based on the words etched in blue I would vote the latter. If so, are you suggesting, or at least inferring by the chosen title, that all of these songs song alike or are attempting to affect the listener the same way?
on some deleted poem
4 Dec 2002, 9:43 AM
This defeats any sort of thing I can say about it. I give it high marks for lack of slash upon entrance into water!
on some deleted poem
4 Dec 2002, 10:40 AM
A poem that starts well and s l o w ly poops. But I suppose that is the point. But could not that point be made with out dipping, say, in the toilet?
on some deleted poem
4 Dec 2002, 10:51 AM
On another note: what happend the the hardcore be-bop, I'm-a-hardcore-cut-you-up-gangsta-london
on some deleted poem
6 Dec 2002, 9:49 PM
I cannot say I care for this one much.