on Inner Peace by god
11 Sep 2002, 1:31 PM
This is stupid. A Haiku is supposed to be an image not some didactic attempt at a proverb.
on the story of an arrogant butterfly by kawakurdi
11 Sep 2002, 1:29 PM
Wow, you spent a lot of time on this goofy thing.
on some deleted poem
11 Sep 2002, 9:36 PM
Pete, where have you been? On a bender in the woods? I missed your poems! Let's get out the bong!!!
on AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 Sep 2002, 2:07 PM
Okay ive been holding it long enough..
you are on sick homophobic bastard.I dont know what's going on in your mind but you might be hurting people and you dont know it. Sick bastard.
you are on sick homophobic bastard.I dont know what's going on in your mind but you might be hurting people and you dont know it. Sick bastard.
on Anfal: Our 9/11 happened many times over by kawakurdi
11 Sep 2002, 2:36 PM
Oh God/Allah/Vishnu please stop. You know you have an excellent idea here, but talk about long and boring and what a stupid title. I was not even interested until you started reeling over the names and that was almost at the end. Poems for political struggle are grand, but this is a weak, weak, did I mention, weak, first draft. .
on some deleted poem
11 Sep 2002, 2:37 PM
Pimple poem.
on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 Sep 2002, 2:38 PM
you are a very sick person my brother died of aids 2 years ago when he had a car crash his blood mixed with another persons u should think more about the poems you write before you post them you dont know how much pain u can cause someone your not even worth any words of violence you should just admit your self to the nearest mental hospital.
on some deleted poem
11 Sep 2002, 2:47 PM
why are all of your poems coming up at once. the torture! They are so bland!
on some deleted poem
11 Sep 2002, 1:18 PM
STARFUCKS IS PART OF
THE EMPIRE EMPIRE, FOOL
IT IS NOT FOR POETS
how dare you
THE EMPIRE EMPIRE, FOOL
IT IS NOT FOR POETS
how dare you
on Tora Bora 2002 by kawakurdi
11 Sep 2002, 1:47 PM
This is as goofy as the last one. It has no umph because it has no valid experience behind it. Who cares?
on 9/11 by dougsoderstrom
11 Sep 2002, 11:53 AM
A 9/11 poem on 9/11 with another 9/11 poem somewhere in here written by the deevil himself. I think it rather bold to try to minimize such a hefty theme into such odd schematics. I wonder if other great tragedies like the holocaust and such went through a period where the writing was generic and over generalized before taking effect in a more personal sense and thus developing its own genre of quality (albeit depressing) literature.
on some deleted poem
11 Sep 2002, 11:55 AM
Wow, is this an olde to GW's crow poem. You even used "cup", although I think that came from another. And another bird poem. And again, I yawn.
on Words by PawnedTidal
10 Sep 2002, 10:13 PM
Sometimes you just get dumped. This sounds more like an angry ex-love letter, but I am not giving you a 0.
on Thank You Mom by savannah
10 Sep 2002, 10:14 PM
!!!!!!!!!I LOVE YOU TOO!!!!! This is the 4th poem in two days with the same last line!!!!!!!!!!
on some deleted poem
10 Sep 2002, 10:18 PM
I feel like you are telling me everything and showing me nothing. Why? Because you are.
on some deleted poem
10 Sep 2002, 10:22 PM
I like the funky flow, but I despise Dave Matthews. I mean seriously why is he so popular. He's crap and because you mentioned him, I now hate a poem I was almost ready to really like.
on some deleted poem
10 Sep 2002, 10:30 PM
Sometimes when I read these poems of yours I imagine Winnie the Pooh sitting there pounding on his head going, "think, think." It seems you latch on to an idea and over think it a bit so what comes to paper may be filled with fancy symbols but lacks ump!! But GW likes it, and that is what matters!
Oh I am afraid to comment because this poem is about drugs. Of it is risqu??. Jesus, Tar bog where do you live where they have that sort of fear. Well any, my problem is not with the subject but the fact that the poem is trite and one long rhetorical question. What are you trying to get at by asking the reader something? Especially when most readers will go, gee, no, why? Am I not hip enough?
on some deleted poem
11 Sep 2002, 11:45 AM
Any poem using the word tears should be tossed in the rubbish can.
on some deleted poem
10 Sep 2002, 4:25 PM
This is not a poem, it is a line.