on The musician by richa
13 Feb 2004, 3:36 PM
nice write
on Black Snake by Butterflywriter
13 Feb 2004, 3:37 PM
witty how it stops at the end
on Crucify Spuna with a Forknostle by SupremeDreamer
13 Feb 2004, 8:58 AM
spunafaNTASTICO ....wild carefree and positively biosterous in its wild abandon and exuberance did it have words i hardly noticed as i bounced along with it...magnificent spunas 'r' us
on some deleted poem
13 Feb 2004, 3:27 PM
its very emotional and the spelling in it is amazing and quite lends itself to someone who is on the edge and isnt bothered about spelling so it adds to the intensity and feeling
on What I Wouldn't Give by jasondingus
13 Feb 2004, 3:31 PM
if you lose the exclamation at the end it will have more impact i
on some deleted poem
13 Feb 2004, 3:32 PM
bit bloody for me at the beginning but the rest was great...very emotional
on some deleted poem
13 Feb 2004, 3:33 PM
lovely
on some deleted poem
13 Feb 2004, 3:34 PM
it was going great until that last stanza where the rhyming just got in the way
on some deleted poem
15 Feb 2004, 7:16 AM
fun..
on some deleted poem
15 Feb 2004, 7:16 AM
fun..
on some deleted poem
15 Feb 2004, 7:16 AM
fun..
on some deleted poem
17 Feb 2004, 12:00 PM
very funny i thought but liable to offend some people which is probably why i like it a lot..
on some deleted poem
17 Feb 2004, 3:06 PM
have you got any poems on All Poetry? i wouldnt mind reading some more of yours
on some deleted poem
2 Mar 2004, 1:36 PM
sardonic sarcastic cynical cyanide words