on some deleted poem
22 Jun 2004, 5:46 AM
Fucktard.
on The Riddle of Creation by Dovina
23 Jun 2004, 3:46 PM
That's a nice little fairy-tale, but I don't buy it.
on some deleted poem
22 Jun 2004, 2:26 PM
Definitely has a haunting feel to it. Something about S3 bothers me, but I'm not sure what it is. I'll have to give it a few more reads. Here's a 9.
on Niggers Don't Write Poetry by pain killer
22 Jun 2004, 2:29 PM
Who are these people? Why would using the word "nigger" give them "cred"? I'll give you a 3 because I'm intrigued, but you're going to have to explain more if you want a good vote.
on some deleted poem
21 Jun 2004, 9:18 PM
Great poem! Do u ever watch Pimp My Ride? That shit is whack.
on The Thinker by cedand1
21 Jun 2004, 8:02 PM
Ok, I dig this one..and extra points for being from Tennessee. ;0)
on some deleted poem
21 Jun 2004, 8:12 PM
For this to be a lyric, I'd like to see a more well defined chorus (I know you don't have to have one, but I like choruses). Otherwise, pretty good.
on "She Phoned This Morning" by ARTIE
21 Jun 2004, 2:35 PM
Good, but I'd like to see you expand it. The "soul doth yearn" thing is a bit (very) old school, but hey, whatever floats your boat.
on some deleted poem
21 Jun 2004, 2:39 PM
This is one of you're better ones that I've read but the rhymes are very forced. Maybe try writing it without the rhymes.
on some deleted poem
21 Jun 2004, 2:42 PM
I thought this was pretty good up until the "online...instant messages. I think if you get rid of that part and maybe reword some of the ending, you'll really have something here.
on some deleted poem
21 Jun 2004, 3:33 PM
Yowza.
on 5/22 by aburiedlife
21 Jun 2004, 3:36 PM
I don't get these people placing their own poems on their favorites list. You have a whole page of your own with all your poems listed there, all neat and tidy.
on some deleted poem
21 Jun 2004, 3:37 PM
fun knee.
on Cool In The Army by wilco
18 Jun 2004, 10:10 PM
What the sam hill?
on some deleted poem
18 Jun 2004, 9:52 PM
I'm getting bored with giving you 9s and 10s so here's a 7. It probably deserves an 8 but, well, I'm drunk and I'm not gonna give ya one.
on Of Gifts by thepinkbunnyofdoom
17 Jun 2004, 4:04 PM
You wascally wabbit.
on West Coast Epilogue (Pseudo Triolet) by wilco
17 Jun 2004, 2:40 PM
A 10 of shame, Zodiac?
on some deleted poem
16 Jun 2004, 9:59 PM
Sorry, i'd like to give you something that I think would make this better, but I got nothin'.
on What's Poetry by Sasha
18 Jun 2004, 9:49 PM
Seems like something you just vomited up, but still not bad.
You've got to change this:
All somewhat whisky, won’t apply at all
If I don’t know who or what you is
You've got to change this:
All somewhat whisky, won’t apply at all
If I don’t know who or what you is