My only problem with this is that it sounds like it should be sung by muppets. No offense, I think it just seems too damn uplifting. There is nothing wrong with that, the wording just seems too simple. Like an off-the-cuff speech from Tony Robbins. I think you can do better.

I agree. The title could be a little better, but great nonetheless.

How can you smoke a joint and call Bob Marley a fag?

I'm not sure exactly what's going on here, but I like the imagery.

I'll give you a 1, just for figuring out how to rhyme.

Waiting to hear of a loved ones death? or a birth?

I get what you're trying to convey, but its not worded in a manner that gives me wood.

You know, and this is just me...but I think if you're going to give somebody a 0, the least you can do is leave a comment giving a reason.

unicorns? really?

Maybe its because I'm drunk...but I get this and I LIKE it...I'll read it sober and see, but right now...yep.

true

Colorado is truly one of the most beautiful places I have ever been.

I've always kind of been of the idea that those signs were more of a PR move than actually caring that the president died. I like this idea better though.

Sorry SD, just not feeling this one..

i.e. - "Loving you will all my heart"

Should that be "with all my heart"?

Personally, I like this a lot better now. Sounds kind of like a Phish song.

another translation?

Started out good, but yes, not as good toward the end..

I must say that I'm more than a little perplesed by this. I guess I'm going to have to do some googling. Anyway..7 for making me think...I may raise it if I figure this out. ;0)

As a translation, it's Ace. I'm just still having trouble with the whole voting for translations as original work thing. Oh well.