on A bar without alcohol by tre
13 Apr 2004, 8:22 PM
I think this poem is hilarious in weird ways. For doing such a good job with a topic such as the gym, I give it.. a TEN!
replying on lost memories by ggawrysi
12 Apr 2004, 4:06 PM
Does ggawrysi go to AU? I came across this poem of his using the "random" feature. Huh. Interesting.
on "How Often, Under Starry Skies" by anastomosis
11 Apr 2004, 10:31 PM
As a philosophy major, I really enjoy the topic of this. <grin> Good job.
on lost memories by ggawrysi
11 Apr 2004, 10:29 PM
Beautiful.
on Cabbagetown will miss you by tre
8 Apr 2004, 9:59 PM
oh my dear it is so long... I also think it can be cleaned up, possibly by making the lines more of a standard length... it's jumbly when there's one really long line followed by something so short... however, there is some good imagery and description going on... I think towards the end though all the particulars started to confuse me, I got a little lost up in them instead of the meaning behind the writing...
replying on ode to summer dreams by jsd
2 Apr 2004, 11:12 PM
haha oh my...
Didn't mean it like that. The "hole" to which I referred is more like a void in one's heart or soul.
Didn't mean it like that. The "hole" to which I referred is more like a void in one's heart or soul.
replying on ode to summer dreams by jsd
2 Apr 2004, 11:11 PM
thanks - the wheels roll line is actually one of my favorites, because a lot of this has to do with driving long hours to meet up with someone I didn't get to see often. thanks for your comment!
replying on post-rock messiah by jsd
1 Apr 2004, 7:28 PM
Hello...
Not too into Jim Morrison, nothing against him, but I've never really listened. :)
Not too into Jim Morrison, nothing against him, but I've never really listened. :)