that sucks - here is mine

dark angel once was the man
but he lingered to long in that van
he wallows in shit
and he can't take a hit
so hit him as hard as you can

i didn't try to imply that. i guess it's just the way it came out. it's just that i don't worry about anything really.

wow, you're not bashing my poem. i even made up a nasty limerick about you for the first time you did bash one of my poems :). not that i really care just cuz nobody else has done that, at least that i have seen.

plus, i think stuff that doesnt rhyme is maddening. it's called different opinions. i've never written anyting that doesn't rhyme.

i was drunk, and need some lyrics to sing so i could join in on the jammin going on in my friends basement.

that's pretty much what i was goin for. thanks.

- "...we sometimes have rallies at Lou's or Pasquale's"

hahaha i like that one

i totally get your point. i thought about the capitalization thing, just didnt feel like doin it. ballet(yes i know how to pronounce it) and valley(or alley or rally) do not rhyme.

ballets doesn't rhyme. and ballys is like the most popular gym in the country. i have never heard of anyone not hearing of it before.

no, i meant ballys. it's a chain of gyms. everything before the last line is what we do everyday. the last line is meant to be the only thing we do find easily is our loss of innocence.