on The Negro by Everyone
29 Apr 2004, 5:40 PM
Wow, Very Very Very intense, strong wording. I really loved the way you wrote this, its so dark, and horrible. Great write
on some deleted poem
29 Apr 2004, 5:41 PM
Hm, I liked the beginning a little more than the end. But good write
on Ah ha ah ha by -=Tan_Hand=-
29 Apr 2004, 5:42 PM
Wow, very strong, very intimidating. This isnt what I was expecting at all. This is either from the perspective of a poor, or homeless man/woman/child. Intense, short and to the point. i give it a 10