A Word

Member since 2004 · Posted 10 May 2004 · 3 comments

A word you did not have to say For I loved you anyway You sent chills up my spine And said everythingâd be fine I believed every word you said I really shouldâve used my head You were like every other guy Playing your game, so slick and sly I found out way too late For my tender heart you did break And now I live my life in fear Never again shedding another tear.

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[8] Sasha 10-May-04/12:58 PM Reply

I find this to be, through no fault of your own, entirely too much like entirely too many other poems on this subject to give it anything more than an 8

[n/a] cuddlytiger17 › Sasha 11-May-04/3:25 PM Reply

I agree with you, many people do write regarding this topic. However, I think an 8 is pretty good lol so thank you!

[9] sliver 12-May-04/6:05 PM Reply

Yea, a little overwritten, but so is almost everything I've ever confined in ink. Still, I like it.