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Black Woman

Member since 2004 · Posted 6 Oct 2004 · 6 comments

Dark am I, yet lovely,dark like the stallion and panther, oh what majestic creatures indeed! I am the color of coal which beautiful diamonds are formed. I am timeless forever was, forever will be. Eyes with the reflection of stars, shining in the mist of night. Strong and proud to withstand the burdens of time. I AM A WOMAN!

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[n/a] jroday 6-Oct-04/10:42 AM Reply

D.A. I know how you feel. but sometimes it's better to
be friends friendships or almost like relationships

[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › jroday 7-Oct-04/8:20 AM Reply

I know what you mean. Some relationships make me feel trapped: http://tinyurl.com/4nw76

[n/a] jroday 6-Oct-04/11:02 AM Reply

Dovina this poem is about one woman not a race and how she feels about herself and how faith gave her the courage to face the uncertainties of the future

[n/a] jroday 7-Oct-04/4:10 AM Reply

I did'nt mean to delete your comments I really did'nt
you can call me an ass hole on this one I'm not a woman
I'm a man and again i apologize to both of you DARK A.
and DOVINA

[5] Dovina › jroday 7-Oct-04/5:50 AM Reply

Appology accepted.

[10] Dreammaker1024 11-Mar-05/9:25 PM Reply

I like it.. I have a similar poem. I like how u portray the black woman, we are "Majestic creatures Indeed".