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Free verse № 101629

FINGER PIE

by titan69

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 May 2004 · Edited 22 Nov 2007 · 22 comments

When we are in bed at night. And I put my arm around you. When my finger tips touch your soft skin. When I get up close and slowly move in. To me it always seems like the first time, that first kiss. =========================================== As you will see. A women under the covers in the dark. never ages.??

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[10] edpeterson 12-May-04/3:04 PM Reply
that is the smelliest poem ever written. 10
[n/a] titan69 › edpeterson 12-May-04/3:13 PM Reply
Tell me about it!!
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 12-May-04/4:31 PM Reply
I'm sorry but I don't vote on lewds -no vote-
[n/a] titan69 › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 13-May-04/1:25 PM Reply
I thought you of all people would have enjoyed
some finger pie.
what is lewd anyway?
[9] zodiac 13-May-04/5:32 AM Reply
Why does the poem have a line through it?
[n/a] titan69 › zodiac 13-May-04/1:27 PM Reply
The bottom bit is a moral sort of thing
[9] zodiac 13-May-04/5:33 AM Reply

Congratulations on posting the worst title on this site since SupremeDreamer's "Ravings of a Dreamer"!
[n/a] titan69 › zodiac 13-May-04/1:40 PM Reply
thank you
[10] Stephen Robins 13-May-04/5:42 AM Reply
The title of this poem implies one of two things - firstly a pie full of fingers - that would be grotesque, or secondly some form of instruction where you would have to literally finger a pie.

The poem however appears to be about putting a child to bed. This poem is confused and poorly written and you may not have noticed but their is a large irrelevant line in the middle.

This all leads me to believe that you are a stultified quim.
[n/a] titan69 › Stephen Robins 13-May-04/1:38 PM Reply
This pome has nothing to do with putting a child to bed
you daft cunt.
finger a pie, pie full of fingers you have to gess what the pie is, get it!
[1] INTRANSIT 13-May-04/6:42 AM Reply
(A women)?
[n/a] titan69 › INTRANSIT 13-May-04/2:33 PM Reply
No next gess
[7] wilco 13-May-04/2:13 PM Reply
Jason Biggs?
[n/a] titan69 › wilco 13-May-04/2:25 PM Reply
who the fuck is jason biggs?
[7] wilco › titan69 13-May-04/2:35 PM Reply
the fucking "American Pie" guy.
[n/a] titan69 › wilco 13-May-04/2:59 PM Reply
sorry never heard of him over hear!
we do have a pie tom though?
[7] wilco › titan69 13-May-04/3:00 PM Reply
Don't know pie tom....
[n/a] titan69 › wilco 13-May-04/3:11 PM Reply
Go to WWW.yorksview.co.uk click on Trivia look down the list for pie tom. that goes for anyone else to who my be reading this?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › titan69 19-May-04/12:45 AM Reply
American Pie was on general release in the UK you dunce.
[n/a] titan69 › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-May-04/12:42 AM Reply
yes I know but i never went to see it.

[n/a] the codeine kid › titan69 2-Jun-04/1:55 PM Reply
Hairy pie. this is fantastic. a woman under the covers never ages. i bet there's loads of "poets" on this site wish they'd wrote that line. Stunning.
[n/a] titan69 › the codeine kid 2-Jun-04/2:48 PM Reply
yes it is a great line iznt it!!!