all sex

Member since 2002 · Posted 23 Apr 2002 · 8 comments

he is all sex and cum and slick oil, underneath his baggy shirts, and rolled-up old-man pants. peering into her pink diary, picking locks, pondering the hot tub. i can see her shimmering empty thoughts, full of him. and he sucks her dry. and i wonder why she takes it all on her back, how she keeps on dancing, how she stays free. he is all sex and cum and slick oil, underneath his baggy shirts, and rolled-up old-man pants. and he sucks her dry.

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[9] nentwined 23-Apr-02/5:54 PM Reply

I take this very darkly; I'm not entirely sure it was meant that way, but it sounds like incest or pedophilia or some such. very vague. it has a good rhythm. :)

[0] anonymous 23-Apr-02/9:32 PM Reply

Fascinating.

[8] horus8 11-Jul-02/9:59 PM Reply

Really?

[5] forestchild7 19-Jul-02/6:43 PM Reply

whoa... serious stuff...

[10] evergreen 19-Jul-02/7:07 PM Reply

i will get right to the point: holy shit. wow.

[7] deleted user 16-Aug-02/11:07 AM Reply

reminds me of an old PJ Harvey song. almost works...but not quite.

[10] deleted user 20-Nov-02/4:06 PM Reply

you're good

I wish I wrote so

[n/a] Caducus 11-Dec-02/10:15 AM Reply

My brothers paranoid, but i told him its not about him.