Hiding

Member since 2004 · Posted 12 Jun 2004 · 5 comments

Blistered feet from walking A thousand miles In someone elses Well worn shoes To fully understand Exactly what they're going through. Thinking I'd lost you Somewhere along the way Only knowing that Eventhough you weren't by my side You were tucked away Inside my heart

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5 comments

[9] electroman1979 12-Jun-04/9:50 PM Reply

good poem

[6] edpeterson 13-Jun-04/7:21 AM Reply

first half cliche...sort of public domain adage.
eventhough ? second half, powerless. average

[8] Shuushin 13-Jun-04/2:50 PM Reply

ahhhh, dat's chute.

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 13-Jun-04/3:45 PM Reply

Tucked away in a bap of shame.

[10] Stephen Robins 14-Jun-04/5:30 AM Reply

Hell's drooping anus enguffed this poem hole.