poemranker ::Exist For You by WithoutLife

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Free verse № 105900

Exist For You

Member since 2004 · Posted 20 Jun 2004 · 3 comments

Before I met you I was consumed with pain, thoughts of death had filled my head ripping away my soul and mind were the thoughts of my life I prayed 'someone save me', my strong deep wish My existance will be up to someone's heart I am living just for you Everything you happen to do for me let me see, let me hear your voice whispers come to me When I want to cry I think of always you, exist for you Without meeting you I would have never healed, with this dagger stuck deep in my heart The winds have been directed by you, to block off any oncoming injury Keep away the Angel of Death, my strong deep wish The fate of my life is up to someone's heart Everything I do is just for you Through the dark night your love's light let me see, let me hear My mind repeats: come to me Now the only reason I get upset is always you, exist for you

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3 comments

[8] MacFrantic 21-Jun-04/1:17 AM Reply
not my genre exactly, but well done. *8*
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21-Jun-04/9:40 AM Reply
Have you been guffed on by a spaztronic guff manual?
[7] zodiac 21-Jun-04/9:05 PM Reply
Can someone tell me what is the present tense of 'wrought'?