poemranker ::I Shall Fight by Torok

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I Shall Fight

Member since 2004 · Posted 22 Jun 2004 · 2 comments

Well if God is blind than what does that leave me to see? If my mind is blank do i cease to be? If God is love, then am i free? If i am hated, am i diseased? For God and for country For the heart and the soul For the man and the monkey For beauty and awe I shall fight.

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[9] Shuushin 22-Jun-04/1:26 PM Reply
I like this (well, no crazy about the lowercase "i"'s) - for me it stays on the right side of honest introspection.
[2] Brittanyy 6-Jul-04/10:37 AM Reply
Uh....Okayy....