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Rainbow

Member since 2004 · Posted 5 Jul 2004 · 7 comments

Rainbows of forbidden desire, flicker without the light, dimming in to the darkness, the kites of my heart take flight. Though the darkned colours, Washed away my sorrow, I Feel for nothing, I am a faded rainbow, drained of emotion filled colours.

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[8] Dovina 5-Jul-04/2:38 PM Reply

Rainbows don't flicker. Other images are inaccurate of language. It's a common theme and hard to do well.

[n/a] zodiac › Dovina 5-Jul-04/2:53 PM Reply

What does "inaccurate of language" mean?

[8] Dovina › zodiac 5-Jul-04/2:58 PM Reply

Kites washing away sorrow.
dimming in to the darkness

[n/a] zodiac › Dovina 5-Jul-04/6:08 PM Reply

That is not an appropriate answer.

[8] Dovina › zodiac 5-Jul-04/6:13 PM Reply

Thank you.

[7] Quarton 5-Jul-04/2:43 PM Reply

Short and sweet. Nice imagery.

[0] god'swife 6-Jul-04/7:36 PM Reply

This is the worst poem I've seen this evening. Try saying something normally.